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5e Pages[edit]
| Page Name | Notes |
|---|---|
| 3rd Generation Pyrokinetic (5e Class) | Needs to be checked out. |
| Ability Score Guide (5e Other) | This could definitely be looked over for consistency and to make sure it's accurate. |
| Abomination, 2nd Variant (5e Class) | <General terminology and balancing, particular notes of balancing is Psych Up+Savage Strike, the Sinful Forms, additional Quickening effects> |
| Alchemist, 2nd Variant (5e Class) | This class has not been play-tested at all, it may be overpowered, it may be underpowered. It may also benefit in having more Transmutations that I couldn't think of. Also, if you can (AKA if your DM allows it), *please* play-test this. If you have ideas, use the talk page. |
| Alter Ego (5e Feat) | As this feat has been changed dramatically, a review to verify that it makes cognizant sense and retains the original flavor of the feat is in order. |
| Animist, Variant (5e Class) | Need to be playtested |
| Apothecary (5e Class) | Want to make sure this is balanced. |
| Arcane Defense (5e Spell) | Double check for balance. Would like to keep it as a 2nd level spell. |
| Arcane Observer (5e Feat) | Not sure if this should be a half feat. |
| Ballroom Blitz (5e Feat) | |
| Beast Twin (5e Class) | Completed all class elements, class should be play ready, please provide feedback as this is my first class. |
| Beast Within (5e Class) | I appreciate any feedback as I develop this class! |
| Berenike Knight (5e Creature) | This creature has received a boost to its defensive capabilities, and needs a recalculation of its CR. |
| Blade Master, Variant (5e Class) | Currently reworked as of 3/7/2020. Pending review. |
| Blood Rogue (5e Subclass) | Needs to be checked over for balance. |
| Boon of Surging Energy (5e Epic Boon) | Definitely want to make sure this isn't too strong for an epic boon. |
| Boon of the War Master (5e Epic Boon) | Not certain this is within the scope of an epic boon. |
| Circle of Moths (5e Subclass) | Article amended on the 17.1.23. Please review for balance requirements. |
| Circle of the Primeval, Variant (5e Subclass) | Article has since been amended to incorporate unique features. Please review for balance. |
| Circle of the Winds (5e Subclass) | Level 14 ability might be a bit over-tuned, give me your thoughts |
| Clairvoyant (5e Class) | rework complete. please comment and ask questions on the discussion page |
| Creator Soul (5e Class) | While I have done my best to balance it, absolutely none of this material has been playtested. |
| Creature Manual (5e Equipment) | Tried to make this less of a discovery nullifier, might be a bit strong. Immunity was chosen over advantage due to many layer actions being along the lines of "Each undead creature in the lair can pinpoint the location of each living creature within 120 feet of it until initiative count 20 on the next round", which theoretically study would allow you to avoid. |
| Cross-Class Subclasses (5e Variant Rule) | Spellcasting progression issues. See talk page. |
| Cryomancer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) | This is my first time making homebrew class, and since this hasn't been playtested yet, it may be overpowered, it may be underpowered. I'd like some feedback to make sure everything is in order. And feel free to change it whenever you feel that something is over/underpowered |
| Cryomancer (5e Class) | Not certain if the features are fine where they are. |
| Cuisiner (5e Class) | The balance and grammar have been noted in separate templates, so I put them together into one |
| Cursed Oni (5e Race) | Changes have been made, unarmed strike needs to be reviewed. |
| Cyber Soldier (5e Subclass) | overclock |
| Dark Knight, Variant (5e Class) | This one could probably use some tweaks and balancing. |
| Divine Hood (5e Equipment) | It's a lot of clerical power overall, especially since it's intended to be usable by any creature. Your thoughts would be appreciated. |
| Dragon Disciple (5e Class) | I'm concerned about some abilities not being worded clearly enough, particularly Arcane Spell Progression. The class is also very powerful, but I don't think it's too out of whack with the power level of first-party content. |
| Earrings of Quick Equipment (5e Equipment) | I think it is balanced but it might need to be a higher rarity |
| Eldritch Guard (5e Class Feature) | This seem alright? Sort of like Beguiling Defenses but for the frightened condition. |
| Elemental Archer, Variant (5e Class) | First time creating a class, would appreciate some extra eyes to balance things, make sure it's all clear. |
| Elemental Caster (5e Class) | This is quite rough, I presume it's still in progress. |
| Eliksni (5e Class) | Tear me apart, y'all. I've never publicized stuff like this before. I did my best, but I bet my values might need work. I'm sure at least one effect on this page will make someone irrationally angry, but I want to improve - for the sake of all my content on this site - so fire away. |
| Elites (5e Creature) | This is my first time making a set of creature, so I assume I got at least a few things wrong. |
| Experimenter (5e Background) | Unsure about whether this Background's Feature is too mechanical. If so, would like some assistance. |
| Fallen Human, Variant (5e Race) | I tried nerfing some things, but this race might still be a little OP. Especially Purple. I added some new traits and tidied it all up based on the glitchtale universe, I intend to rework the normal souls, to have a better scaling |
| Field Surgeon (5e Feat) | How's this look? |
| Finesse Mastery (5e Feat) | Is this different enough from finesse weapon master? |
| Flood Infection Form (5e Creature) | |
| Forgemaster (5e Class) | The class is mostly new and require a lot review from contributors |
| Foxfolk (5e Race) | History, Society, and traits. I would like a second opinion on them. |
| Fusilier (5e Subclass) | Unsure which features should be assigned to which level. |
| Gear Driver (5e Class) | Class should be done. I'm not 100% sure about the borrowed maneuvers. Gears can be added, as well as techniques and maneuvers |
| Gems (5e Race) | Many, MANY of the features here are very awkward, and the musicus scores provided are far off. This entire race needs a onceover before it is considered functional. |
| Gravekeeper (5e Class) | Nothing here has been playtested. Please post thoughts in the talk page after testing it. |
| Greydwarf (5e Race) | Newly completed. Needs to be checked over before it is finalized. |
| Guarded Fighter (5e Class) | I want to make sure that this class is properly balanced. |
| Hallowed Hunter (5e Class) | I would like for somebody to playtest this class. Feedback about how to better balance it would be appreciated. |
| Heroic Spirit (5e Class) | There may still be some balancing left to do, but this page should be on the right track for improvement. |
| Hiemalis (5e Class) | I have made the requested changes ("The damage is a bit too high. Uses per long rest need to be introduced to balance this out."), and would like to know if the amount of them are enough, or if it need further adjustments. I put a proper explanation for the changes on the discussion page. Also, a general opinion would be nice as well. Additionally I added the 3rd Archetype, and it needs evaluation as well, and I have some concerns there. Again, see the discussion page for that. |
| Horsefolk (5e Race) | Needs the new layout to be checked for balance. If everything is balanced now, please remove the review and needsbalance templates. |
| Hunter's Bow (5e Equipment) | This seem fair? |
| Hunter of Artemis (5e Class) | Changes have been made, a review or playtesting would be good to see what else can be improved - 6 June 2019 |
| Hyperactive (5e Feat) | This seem more like an epic boon? |
| Hyperdimensional Klein Bottle (5e Equipment) | Looking for assistance with proofreading, editing, cleanup, and peer review! Might also need to redo the wording to patch potential unwanted exploits. |
| Inscribed Veil (5e Equipment) | Some of the specific wording might need cleaning or clarifying. If it doesn't, please remove this template. |
| Jarkad (5e Race) | Improved slightly upon the race's Fluff, changed several features which seemed excessive, and removed its rather excessive subraces. Would like to see if it has improved to a substantial degree. |
| Kamen Rider Heisei (5e Class) | Needs to be re-reviewed. |
| Ki Fighter, Variant (5e Class) | Overall balance, mechanical suggestions. I'm still quite green on class creation. I'm also not sure how to communicate with other users. For now, I am going to work on the ki fighter base before adding any school features. Also, I want this class to be mechanically sound before adding any flavor. |
| Living Weapon, Variant (5e Class) | Double check to see if this is balanced. |
| Lucky Block (5e Equipment) | Would appreciate additional ideas on the things this object could potentially unleash. |
| Lycanthrope (5e Class) | Anything that needs balancing/re-wording/changing/improving? Please let me know in the talk page. |
| Lynel (5e Race) | Work in progress and in need of an opinion if it's balanced or not. See talk page |
| Magi Hunter (5e Subclass) | Please review to see if this subclass requires any changes or if it's finished. |
| Magian Magnate (5e Class) | Subclasses could use a good look over. |
| Magic Domain (5e Subclass) | Overall feel, Channel Divinity: Metamagic and Anyspell |
| Magic Marksman (5e Subclass) | I am not sure of the overall balance of this subclass. |
| Magical Girl (5e Class) | Fixed up initial wording, now to get through some balancing and brainstorming. Just go a tad easy, I freak out easy at sudden edits. |
| Magus Venator (5e Subclass) | Please review to see if this subclass requires any changes or if it's finished. |
| Maid (5e Subclass) | This subclass seems to possibly edge out official battlemaster? |
| Manx (5e Race) | Changes to the balance need to be reviewed. |
| Marionetista (5e Class) | |
| Marsh's Dodgeball (5e Spell) | Needs Testing and Feedback. |
| Martial-Arts Master (5e Feat) | Please review this Feat and clarify if any abilities are overpowered. If you have any ideas on new martial arts books you are welcome to add your propositions. I want to make sure this is balanced. (and also grammatically correct). |
| Mercurial (5e Class) | Subclass Balancing. Scholars don't do anything different/interesting, they just do the same thing but more. The Conduit level 15 feature is not balanced at all and really needs the second half to just be replaced. |
| Monk, 3rd Variant (5e Class) | Too much choice, perhaps to simplify. |
| Monk, 7th Variant (5e Class) | Hi everyone, I'm looking for a way to highlight in red the text I changed, to make it easier to compare with the original. |
| Morphic Cloak (5e Equipment) | The "Shift" feature might be a little excessive, or might not be needed. It's a feature I want it to have, but if it's too much it can be nerfed or removed. |
| Mystic, 5th Variant (5e Class) | in this revisited , i remove feature (like double concentration) and i scale the psi point like a half-cast(WU-Jen). this make like the class less overpower but this need playted to check the new balance |
| Mystic Theurge (5e Class) | Recently completed. |
| Myxapia Armor (5e Equipment) | I Want to make sure this is balanced. |
| Oath of Hospitality (5e Subclass) | This subclass was created with the intent to allow a lawful good character to assist a less than perfect party. Compatibility is still in question. Playtesting is needed. |
| One For All (5e Feat) | While I tried to make it less powerful, I’m stil not convinced this is balanced. |
| Path of the Chicken (5e Subclass) | |
| Path of the Toxophilite (5e Subclass) | I would like for somebody to playtest this subclass. Feedback on features that need rebalancing would be appreciated. |
| Perfect Blade (5e Subclass) | open to playtesting! |
| Phantom Thief of Hearts (5e Class) | Want to make sure this is properly balanced. |
| Planar Imprisonment (5e Spell) | The spell had a complete overhaul and requires some overall review on balance and effects. |
| Psychic (5e Class) | Any problems with this? talk page |
| Purification Beads (5e Equipment) | I'm not sure if this is entirely balanced, so I would appreciate feedback on how balanced it is. |
| Ranged Weapon Expert (5e Feat) | This seems like way too much for a feat. |
| Raposa (5e Race) | |
| Reaver (5e Class) | Currently under progress to balance, any suggestions would be useful after the previous comments have been followed through. - 2nd June 2019 |
| Rebel Corps Soldier (5e Class) | I want to make sure that this class is properly balanced. |
| Regi (5e Race) | Massive culling of several features has been done to bring it closer to balance. Should be looked over. |
| Runesmith (5e Class) | I appreciate any feedback as I develop this class! |
| Scarcaster (5e Class) | This class technically finished, just needs to be reviewed and reworked/rebalanced if need, possibly playtested |
| Scholar of the Ancients (5e Feat) | Double check for balance. |
| Scorpion Knight (5e Subclass) | I would like someone more knowledgeable about the Fighter class to look this over and see if there are any areas that can be improved. |
| Series 800 Terminator (5e Class) | Needs reviewing and tweaking before completion |
| Shadowhunter (5e Class) | <Did some more changes based off more testing done. Just would like another check over. |
| Shield of The Order of Cheasuene (5e Class) | Play Testing has begun and would like to get a take on the balance/imbalance of the class structure so appropriate changes can be made. |
| Shieldbearer (5e Class) | so many edits since the needsbalance was added. |
| Songbird (5e Race) | First time writing a race so it definitely needs to be balanced. |
| Sorcerer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) | Not sure the base class is different enough to be considered a variant. |
| Soulbringer (5e Class) | Tear me apart, y'all. I've never publicized stuff like this before. I did my best, but I bet my values might need work. I'm sure at least one effect on this page will make someone irrationally angry, but I want to improve - for the sake of all my content on this site - so fire away. |
| Spell Mine (5e Spell) | --needs to be tested. |
| Spellborn (5e Race) | First time creating a full on race, would like to know what needs fixing and what needs improving or balancing |
| Staff of Arcane Mastery (5e Equipment) | Double-check for balance. |
| Staff of Weave Manipulation (5e Equipment) | How's it look? |
| Staff of the Wilds (5e Equipment) | Never played druid before, but thought this was more fitting than the moon sickle. |
| Storm Knight (5e Class) | Class recently underwent a major revision. |
| Tactical Doll (5e Race) | Newly added optional variant traits for subraces that don't use the Imprint equipment. |
| Tarot Master (5e Class) | Needs playtested. I feel the random aspect of drawing cards helps balance it out, but without a proper test, I can only speculate. |
| The Haunting (5e Subclass) | |
| The Hollow, Variant (5e Subclass) | This subclass needs more playtesting and balance checks. Also suggestions on theme-appropriate changes. |
| The Hollow (5e Subclass) | Concerned about relative strength of subclass, but afraid too many nerfs will strip flavor. |
| The Inscribed, Epithet Variant (5e Class) | I want to make sure this is properly balanced. |
| The Isle of Abundance (5e Quest) | As english is not my first language and im bound to make mistakes, i'd like for someone to look this over for grammar and spelling mistakes, as well as griveous plotholes |
| Tiefling, Sin Variant (5e Race Variant) | Looking to playtest and see if Heredity of the Coveter is okay or not. |
| Tiered Weapon Weight (5e Variant Rule) | Scores could use a second opinion. |
| Trainee (5e Class) | Just wanted to see other people's thoughts about this. |
| True Blood of the Dragon (5e Subclass) | article more closely resembles a new Base Class, rather than an Subclass |
| Two-Weapon Master (5e Feat) | Double-check damage, see talk page. |
| Undead Master (5e Class) | I would like some opinions on this, cause I have no clue if this is balanced at all. For details, see the talk page. |
| Unmade (5e Race) | Still busted? |
| Vanquishing Staff (5e Equipment) | I'm curious on what people think about this magic item, I ended up creating it on the fly in my campaign, and so now I'm giving it official mechanics. I want to know if it's balanced, if it looks weird or not, etc. I also need an image... anyone wanna draw one for me? xD |
| Vessel (5e Class) | This page had undergone a complete overhaul. It should be looked over for balance. |
| Vocal Choker (5e Equipment) | Voice of Voices might be too much. |
| Voice of the Gods (5e Class) | Did a lot of (non-communication) edits on this with along with the creator, very worried about how unbalanced this class it (I think it is unbalanced, I just don't know how unbalanced) |
| Void Blink (5e Spell) | Was a custom spell. This may need balancing. |
| Wanderer (5e Class) | This class has not been playtested. It may be overpowered, or underpowered, or difficult to balance due to differing spellcasting rules based off a playtest material class. At any rate, it could use someone else than the author looking at it to see obvious issues the author missed. |
| Warcraft Death Knight (5e Class) | This page has recently undergone a rework of sorts, and any input would be appreciated on the talk page. |
| Warrior Bloodline (5e Subclass) | this class is effectively finished for now but still needs to be playtested and balanced if necessary |
| Warrior Poet (5e Class) | This class is technically finished. Playtesting and balance discussion is needed. |
| Warrior of the Sun (5e Class) | Could use a good thorough look over for balance. |
| Way of Yin and Yang (5e Subclass) | Just finished with grammer jobs and many else - I would be most gracious to have this subclass reviewed. I'm pretty sure there must be some balancing issues, but I can't exactly tell which. |
| Way of the Adaptive Spirit (5e Subclass) | Looks like there are too many features that are together overpowered. |
| Way of the Battle Master (5e Subclass) | I'd like to ask for your help in balancing this new subclass and helping me distinguish it from the original Fighter's "Battle Master". |
| Way of the Fractured Revelation (5e Subclass) | Newly made, feels overbalanced, but I'm not too sure |
| Way of the Martial Master (5e Subclass) | Please review this subclass and clarify if any abilities are overpowered. I want to make sure this is balanced. (and also grammatically correct). |
| Way of the Ninja (5e Subclass) | Please review this subclass and clarify if any abilities are overpowered. I want to make sure this is balanced. (and also grammatically correct). |
| Way of the Spider (5e Subclass) | Please review this article to see if it is complete or needs changes. |
| Way of the Tempest (5e Subclass) | The damage values for Synaptic Flow are in need of further playtesting. |
| Weapon Expert (5e Feat) | Not completely certain about the balance here. |
| Witch, 3rd Variant (5e Class) | This is inspired by Witch 5e and a few other sources/ideas. Consult with DM before using, class may be un balanced. Playtesting and feedback is appreciated! |
| Witch (5e Class) | This class may be unbalanced. Playtesting and feedback would be very helpful to make this class usable for campaigns. |
| Witchborn (5e Subclass) | As a Gish Sorcerer designed for multiclassing with unorthodox options, more strenuous playtesting is probably in order. |
| Witcher, 7th Variant (5e Class) | Double check balance, essentially a remastered version of the one Witcher class that isn't a variant. I think it's still a little loaded with all it gets, but not too much I hope. |
4e Pages[edit]
| Page Name | Notes |
|---|---|
| Bloody Claw (4e Power) | General opinion of the extra effect in the hit. Should the damage die be decreased? Should it be just Str damage? Str+Dex? No damage and just the effect on a hit? |
| Saiyan Great Ape (4e Creature) | |
| Winter's Wrath (4e Power) | Is this the appropriate level for this power? |
3.5e Pages[edit]
2.5e Pages[edit]
| Page Name | Notes |
|---|---|
| Hrragh (2.5e Disease) | game mechanics changed/updated |
Pathfinder Pages[edit]
d20M Pages[edit]
| Page Name | Notes |
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Uncategorized Pages[edit]
Pages with no edition category.
| Page Name | Notes |
|---|---|
| Abjuration Lord (3.5e Prestige Class) | Newly created– other Improving, reviewing, or removing templates may be required. |
| Holy Knight Vindicator (3.5e Prestige Class) | Newly created– other Improving, reviewing, or removing templates may be required. |
| User:NightmareXIII | This class does have its perks, It functions incredibly close to that of a paladin only with some other features, Feel free to use this class and tell me how it goes.... But PLEASE discuss this with your DM before adding it to a game! Thank you. |
