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Page Name Notes
+anima (3.5e Bloodline) Spelling and grammar needs improving throughout.
3 Stage Mass Combat (5e Variant Rule) This is incredibly cluttered with a huge number of grammatical and spelling errors that culminate in this being completely indecipherable.
617 Pages (5e Spell) The rules for how this spell works and what CR creature you can summon is written in a way that makes it hard to understand.
Aakronus (5e Deity) Paragraphs needed.
Aloii, Variant (5e Race) race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Amphibimen (5e Race) Arbitary use of Italicization, skills/size need to be capitalized, race and subrace names should not be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are also several miswritten traits that should be cleaned up to match the first party wording.
Ancient Warforged (5e Race) Basic grammar issues. Refers to traits that don't exist. Everything after the walking speed under Speed should be its own trait. The wording for most of the traits is incorrect. For example, the natural weapons should use the same wording as the tabaxi's, Ancient History should use that similar to Stonecunning, Machine mind should use the wording for Keen Mind, Maintenance is totally vague("certain ancient arifacts???", etc...)
Animated Shield (5e Race) Spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Anime Dragonborn (5e Race) A number of spelling and grammatical errors throughout.
Antimagic (5e Variant Rule) This could use some cleanup to make it easier to read and understand exactly what this rule does.
Arcaedia (5e Race) Spectral Limbs is written and mechanically presented as if it were a class feature. I am unsure of which existing fiction this is attempting to replicate but this trait could be vastly simplified/ broken down and ideally should be.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Arcania (5e Race) Grammar needs work and traits are not worded correctly mechanically.
Ardalkhayan Gnomes (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armament Mage, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armament Mage (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Armor of Othrys (5e Spell) "Ablative" does not make sense in this case.
Armored Robe of the Ancient Guardian (5e Equipment) Many errors of capitalization, grammar, and punctuation.
Asari, Variant (5e Race) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Ash ones (3.5e Race) The grammar and spelling in this article is lacking.
Asmodeus (5e Creature) The description of this creature needs to be replaced with material that wasn't plagiarized from another book.
Avalai (5e Race) The tone of the article seems to flirt with the line between dejected, and comical. It would benefit from a rewrite focusing on either making this an April Fools article, or a polished article.
Battle-hardened (3.5e Race) Traits and skills need to be capitalized.
Beastmen (5e Race) Traits are worded incorrectly/poorly, consult the 5e Race Design Guide.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade Master, Variant (5e Class) Class names and certain other words are capitalized when they should not be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, several phrases would benefit from conforming to the norms of 5e. For example, "1st level" should replace "level 1," and the boons granted by a class are "features" as opposed to "abilities."
Blade ot Tathagata (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need help.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Blood Sorcerer (5e Subclass) All of the features need to be rewritten for clarity.
Bloodguard (5e Class) Some features use "per day" recharge. Usually features in 5e recharge their uses in a short or a long rest
Bloodrager (5e Class) Some features use "per day" recharge. Usually features in 5e recharge their uses in a short or a long rest
Bobo'gnung (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. It's level not lvl, Hit Points not Hp, 1d4 not 1D4,etc.
Build A God (5e Class) Numerous grammatical mistakes in its singular ability.
Bulwark, Variant (5e Class) The notes to the primary contributor all over this page need to be addressed, removed, or moved to the talk page.
Burning Thingy (5e Disease) Numerous grammar and punctuation problems.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Cannon Fodder Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording is rather confusing.
Caribespeon (5e Race) "You have a flying speed of 6 double jumps" and other glaring errors.
Chick Thrower (5e Class) Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Child Of Cosmos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Chosen (5e Class) It's a minor issue, but this content would be improved if more words and phrases followed 5e precedent. E.g., "13th level" is preferred over "level 13." Class names are common nouns and usually shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Connected Twins (5e Race Variant) Capitalization and some wording.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crimson Templar (5e Class) Class features need to be written to match 5e standards.
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English.
Crystalisk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Spear (5e Equipment) DCs based on hit points is also "sloppy". There's a lot to keep track of or ask and consider when making an attack. This item is very dense. It would benefit from condensing if possible.
Dark Weapon (5e Class) Needs help with grammar and readability.
Darvatoura's Crazy Carriage (3.5e Equipment) Numerous spelling issues.
Daunting Volt Blade (5e Spell) The grammar is poor enough that it is hard to understand what this spell does.
Dawn Rosepetal (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked for issues.
Daywalker (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, alignments aren't capitalized, Age/Alignment/Size should be fully written out, Basic sentence structuring, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", etc...
Dead Iron (3.5e Equipment) This is a mess to read and confusing.
Death Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Needs a run through for wording, and especially abbreviations. Think I got most of them.
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Death Monarch (5e Class) Sentences should, have, ends, and no, commas allover. A general grammar cleanup is necessary.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demon Brawler (3.5e Class) Grammar and terminology need much improvement.
Demon Whisperer (5e Class) Many features are worded in a confusing or vague way. Ideally, terms used would more closely following 5th edition precedent. There is minimal description that would benefit from expansion. See the talk page.
Demonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dire Damage (5e Variant Rule) Large number of grammar, spelling, and capitalization errors. Many things need to be rewritten for clarity. "same as" should typically be copied, and have the keywords specific to that part replaced. "will save" isn't a thing in 5e, if it's another variant please link to it. 'Note' is used very liberally throughout the page, and should be reexamined for impact. These notes can likely be restructured to flow naturally from one point to another. As this is a rule, mechanics should be firm and well defined, instead of wishy washy (Ex. "rolls likely being 19 or 21").
Dire Death (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and terminology issues throughout.
Dire Diseases and Curses (5e Variant Rule) Numerous spelling errors and erratic capitalization.
Dire Survival Rules (5e Variant Rule) Numerous grammar/spelling mistakes, and a lack of punctuation make this very difficult to read. Many mechanics are poorly phrased, or confusing. Mechanics need to be firm and well defined. As printed, several sections read like a casual letter to DMs instead of a rule.
Disciples (3.5e Race) The grammar needs to be fixed and some of the sentences are confusing.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Doom Shaper (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording, and some miss-capitalization.
Doomcannon (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Doomed Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Draakra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "You are medium sized.", "You have advantage on saving throws against being knocked prone." not "You have advantage against being knocked prone.", etc...
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Dragon Eater (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling needs improving. Still mentions god devouring in the lead sentence and in other places from a hasty cut-and-paste.
Dragon Fang (3.5e Equipment) Spell turning needs formalizing, perhaps just by saying you can cast SRD:Spell Turning so many times per day.
Dragon Troll (5e Race) Capitalization and grammar issues, as well as many of the traits should be reworded to not be so conversational.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Dragon Wyrmling (5e Race) The race's traits and class's features do not follow established 1st party wording. For example, spells should be lowercase and italicized, expertise is a class feature not a term, use of "once per rest" instead of established wording on features which are regained on a short or long rest, ect.
Dragonborn Angel (5e Subrace) Inncorrect capitalization/wording throughout. Damage types, movement types, armor, etc are not capitalized. "feet/foot" should be written instead of "ft".
Dragonkin (4e Race) Several spelling errors and grammar issues
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize
Dread Fighter, Variant (5e Class) Class features need to state at which level they are gained.
Drow Stepmaker (3.5e Class) Diffult to read; poor flow, and some grammar.
User:Durza This needs to be in English; this appeared as spam to me before I realised it was a class page.
Dwarves, Sundered (3.5e Race) "This race was originally published in The Complete Book of Dwarves for AD&D 2nd Edition." should be reworded.
Earth Clan (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout such as alignments, race names, etc and vague traits written like notes when they should use first-party wording. Brackets should be avoided as traits should be written like full sentences. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Earth Kingdom (5e Race Variant) wording/capitalization errors. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. You should endeavor to use the same wording as the first party.
Ed Kid (5e Race) Requires a rewrite to use 5th edition terminology and many traits need to actually make sense.
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Eldritch Hunter (5e Class) So many sentence fragments and run-on sentences that it's difficult to read almost everything on this page.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Elementalist, 2nd Variant (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Elementalist (3.5e Class) The whole spell section should be simplified, or trimmed down.
Eliëis (3.5e Race) Some sections have poor flow, and would benefit from a revision.
Emotions (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Ensemble of Elegance (5e Spell) The wording on this still seems to be a bit awkward and confusing.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Evorian (5e Race) Traits needs to be worded with mechanical benefits. What does making out details on objects do?
Ex-machina (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Fae Fang (5e Class) Uses "per day" recharging. Class features in 5e recharge on a short or long rest. The name of the spells should not be capitalized.
Faenur (5e Race) Help in capitalization, grammar cleanup needed
Fallen Angel, Variant (5e Race) Traits need to be rewritten to mimic the first party as they are currently ineloquent and vague.
Fallen Divinity (5e Class) A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, skills should be capitalized, ft instead of feet, 8d4 not 8D4, damage types shouldn't be capitalized, etc...
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Fennec, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "A fennecs size is medium", "You are proficient in the Perception and Survival skill." not "This gives you a proficiency towards all survival and perception skills.", etc...
Fennec (5e Race) Traits are incorrectly worded such as the natural weapons which should use the same wording as the tabaxi's. Several other issues that can be fixed by consulting the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Fifth (5e Race) Wording does not follow standards, see the 5e Race Design Guide.
Firebane (5e Equipment) Energy absorption part 2 is very confusing, and would benefit from clarification/a rewrite. "you can roll on attack on a spell" what does this mean? Is "on a hit" supposed to be "on a successful save"?
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Flamefist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) spelling/grammar
Flora Colossus (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Forest Hylian (4e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, as they aren't proper nouns.
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Freelancer (5e Class) The inserted text should not start with an exclamation point. The class features need to state at which level they are gained in the text.
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Gallifreyan, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like bullet points on a character sheet. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "Your Strength score increases by 2" not "Strength +2", race names are capitalized, etc...
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gems, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Glacier (5e Spell) Grammar problems are in abundance on this page.
Gladiator Beast (5e Subrace) Sentences are not complete. Traits are incorrect.
Gnome, Variant (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Grappler, Variant (5e Class) Does not follow conventional wording. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Gravitation manipulator (5e Class) The first word of each sentence needs to be capitalized.
Gravitonic Archer (5e Class) Full of incorrect terminology. STR and INT need to be worded right, the action types need to be explained correctly, and the wording needs to be finely combed through.
Greater Hellhound (5e Race) Several features need to be reworded.
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Gunslinger, Pathfinder Variant (5e Class) Features should be in second person point of view ('the gunslinger' -> 'you').
Half-Celestial Born (5e Race) Traits need to be written in full and follow the first parties wording scheme.
Half-Goblin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Half-Goblin Variant (5e Race) Wording throughout is poor.
Half-Golem (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "medium", "Your Strength score increases by 1." not "+1 Strength", damage types aren't capitalized and languages/ability scores are capitalized, 2 week is vague as the period of a week varies from setting to setting(this should be listed in days), etc...
Half-human (Quarter-orc, quarter-elf) (5e Race) Despite all the traits used being already written and the race doing nothing different the traits are still written incorrectly. See the PHB for the correct wording and consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize if in doubt.
Half Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Hanson Clan Static (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/bolding/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference correctly. Nonmagical lightning damage, random capitalizations, external-internal links to SRD's,
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Haunted Skull (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Herbalist (5e Class) Features are not worded right. See the 5e Class Design Guide.
Heron Laguz (5e Race) The wiki has a page that tells you Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. So "Deception" should be "Deception". "Fire should be "fire". See also the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference key parts of the race.
Hollower (5e Class) The grammar, spelling, and capitalization need to be fixed.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Holy Weapon User (5e Class) The grammar and phrasing of the features need a lot of work.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Human Tradesman (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or clearly misinterpret terminology used. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "considered medium", "Performance(Instrument)" when "instrument" is not a skill, "Your Constitution, Wisdom or Intelligence score increases by 2 and one other ability score of your choice increases by 1." not "Gain +2 to Intelligence, Constitution or Wisdom and +1 to another ability of your choice. As normal, you can not increase an ability beyond 20 in this way.", etc...
Humanoid Tarrasque (5e Creature) Actions should be capitalized.
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Hunter of the Undead (3.5e Prestige Class) What is "suffered the loss of a complete level"? Do you mean a negative level?
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Hydris (5e Race) The traits are worded poorly, not just in terms of failing to meet the sites Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize guide and basic grammatical standards but also in terms of matching first-party wording. The traits are often convoluted and need to be rewritten to be more concise and mechanically significant.
Imperturbable (5e Feat) Text is not standard.
Incarnated Barrier of the Void (5e Equipment) Features need significantly improving for grammar and terminology.
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Japanese Kitsune (5e Race) Unclear and confusing wording. Also Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Jarkad (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improvement.
Jigoku No Soko No Ha (5e Equipment) Improper wording throughout.This is worded as casual conversation rather than description of mechanics. The physical description of the weapon is extremely technical, and combined with the frequent spurts of a foreign language that makes it somewhat difficult to visualize. It would benefit from some streamlining. What does "(Good old)Chaotic Evil" mean?
Kender, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kenitic Empower (4e Ritual) The wording is a bit confusing.
Kenseijin (3.5e Class) Multiple spelling and grammar issues.
Kettle of Toin (3.5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving.
Key of the King's Law, Bab-ilu (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Kinetic Deviant (5e Class) Unconventional wording throughout.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune, Variant (5e Race) There are grammatical errors which deviate from standards; see Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize The wording in several places would be improved if it conformed to 5e norms. Ideally the image would have not only an author and site, but a url link to the page from which it originates.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Subrace) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Kobold, 2nd Variant (5e Race Variant) This race variant's traits need to be cleaned up so its traits follow the wording of 1st party traits.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.
Kurikara (5e Equipment) See the holy avenger and staff of magi for how to properly word this item's effects.
Kurotsume (3.5e Race) Spelling errors.
Lair of the Dark Beast of Waves (5e Environment) Grammar mistakes throughout.
Lamia, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Larkoush (3.5e Deity) Writing is substandard. Grammar needs improving.
Lemanus Rex (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to checked over.
Lemurian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Life Givetaker (3.5e Class) The abilities are confusing to the degree that they are not understandable.
Limb Growth (5e Spell) Several grammatical errors and several mechanics are described in confusing ways.
Lithune, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors such as race names and comma's before "however". Missing references such as skills. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Artifice (5e Template) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Living Doll variant (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lizardfolk, 3rd Variant (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need much improvement.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lombax (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Lords of the secret citadel (4e Quest) Capitalization, and wording could be stronger.
Lost Dragon (5e Class) The description specifically describes a race. If this is intended to be a race-exclusive class, or a hybrid of race and class, it should be treated primarily as a race and include details like racial traits. Other homebrew examples of this include barbed devil and goron. If it doesn't make any sense to multiclass into "lost dragon," then it probably shouldn't be primarily a class.

Class features and race features should generally be written from a second person perspective ("you"), but many of this class's features use a third-person perspective ("the Dragon") or switch between them. Many words are capitalized in an odd way. Even "For" is capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Class and race names are common nouns and usually should not be capitalized. More on this subject can be found in Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Love Princess (3.5e Class) Spells should be lowercase.
Lovers Quarrel (5e Equipment) See talk page. Aside from that the page contains a number of grammatical and spelling errors.
Lowly Peasant (5e Class) The wording is jumbled in some places.
Lucario, 2nd Variant (5e Race) Capitalization and italization. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) lesser aura needs to be detailed appropriately, or the spell needs its own page and linked to. Similar to greater aura. race names are not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. Mega Evolution has listed an ability but no reference in the traits. Bone rush needs mechanics written in the description of spell needs its own article and the bone rush trait links to it in the description.
Lumate (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lupox (5e Race) Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as there are several inconsistencies on the page such as race names, ability scores, etc. Traits should be fully written out not partially and not use abbreviations.
Lycan Hexblade (5e Class) See talk page.
Machine (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Magi (5e Race Variant) Many traits are poorly worded.
Man for the job (Human varient) Page name is misspelled.
Martial Artist (5e Class) Incomplete and incorrect wording throughout.
Martial Warden (5e Class) Though there are no grevious errors, revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "9th level" instead of "level 9"; consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Masked (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, have excessive waffle or are written casually. Race names, alignments shouldn't be capitalized for example.
Masks of Forms (5e Equipment) keywords like Brave, Dwarven Toughness, and other racial traits need written out. Players shouldn't be expected to research or refer to other pages to know what their stuff does.
Master Ninja (5e Class) The class features are mostly written in sentence fragments
Master of the Sword (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar problems throughout. Many of the features need to be reworded for clarity.
Matter Thing (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Mechon (5e Race) Overly wordy traits. Several grammatical errors.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Melshaper (5e Class) Spelling could be looked over.
Meltskin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Memory Make Mage (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, or wrote with a seemingly unflavorful, unprofessional tone.
Metalborn (5e Race) race names aren't capitalized
Metamorphic (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Meteor Hammer, Variant (3.5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar needs improving
Mogwai (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Monk's Bow (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar with many capitalization and punctuation problems as well as several instances of terms being improperly worded(use 3rd level instead of level 3, Dexterity instead of dex, ect.). See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Moon Zerker (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. Stacks are called 'moon's fury' but later called 'moon stacks'. What are basic skills in the 'full moon' feature? Many capitalization mistakes. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Mortal Draw (5e Feat) Uses A Lot Of Title Case.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Murder Mite (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Naruto Ninja, Variant (3.5e Class) This class's features are often confusing/don't make sense while also having a ton of grammar mistakes found throughout the page. All, in all could use some significant clean up. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Needleback Slayer of Yurot (5e Creature) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized and the names of features and actions should be in title case.
Nen User (Killua) (5e Class) Capitalization needs to fixed throughout.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nicodemus (Raesokera Supplement) Needs to looked over.
Nightborne (5e Subrace) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightmare (3.5e Race) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Ninja, Variant (5e Class) Not well worded, uses "per rest" wording. In addition, many words that shouldn't be capitalized are.
Nobody (3.5e Template) spelling
Nonon (5e Race) Nonsensically worded.
Nordic Warrior (5e Class) Muddled wording throughout, and doesn't use correct 5e terms. See SRD for a composite of 5e terms.
NorthSky (3.5e Pantheon) Try paragraphs; get rid of the camelCase
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Capitalization, and some wording.
OG Armos (5e Creature) Capitalization would be improved if it conformed to D&D norms. E.g., alignments and creature names aren't capitalized. Please consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Punctuation is missing or incorrect in several places. Some phrases don't make sense, and sentences seem to cut off before they are finished.

Okami (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Old One's Gauntlets (5e Equipment) The wording of this item is a mess. The item's properties don't mention how they can be activated, don't mention a range, and since it isn't mentioned you can use the item on creatures you can not see. In addition, there is round counting, usage of the "per duration" wording instead of standard magical item recharge wording, and a variety of other grammatical problems.
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Osmosian (5e Race) Traits are exceedingly wordy and need to be cut down as well as simplified. Other glaring wording errors throughout.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
PSI User (5e Class) Many of the features use title case. While the greek symbols are appropriate to the original franchise, they should be changed to their English counterparts so that a player won't have to know the source material in order to know how to say the names of the features.
Pantheran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Path of Crash (5e Subclass) Grammar and capitalization would benefit from revision. Feature headers should be capitalized, for example.
Path of The Otherworldly (5e Subclass) This page needs some serious grammatical help.
Path of the Chosen (5e Subclass) There are a lot of grammatical errors throughout.
Path of the Frozen Warrior (5e Subclass) See 5e Class Design Guide for how to word the class features.
Pebble Dirgen (5e Equipment) Capitalization, and the description could be reworded.
Pet Lover (5e Background) Various grammar and spelling issues.
Phantom Thief Of Hearts (5e Class) CamelCase all over.
Phaseling (5e Class) The last line of the last class feature does not have a clear meaning, if any. There is also an issue with the Pocket Portal feature, as it's diameter is defined as being equal to the phaseling's level, but does not specify which unit (feet, squares, miles) is used for the conversion. Even if the unit is feet, however, which it most likely is, this is in no way a small portal, as the feature would suggest. Also, the level at which a feature is gained should be placed at the beginning of that feature's description, not halfway through.
Phenix, The Creatures of Fire (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Pheonix born (3.5e Class) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Pictsie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capitalization.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Possesion Doll (5e Race) Some traits are worded incorrectly, or confusing.
Pren (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague in places. For example, languages/racial trait names/ability scores should be capitalized, special sights should not be, "ft" or "STR" should not be used as they are abbreviations and should be their full text, all creatures are proficient in their unarmed strikes, etc...
Priaced (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Prophet (3.5e Prestige Class) See talk.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Protector (5e Class) Uses the per rest wording.
Protector (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells are not capitalized, ability scores are as is Armor Class, etc... Consult the 5e Race Design Guide for help.
Provisions of "Magic" (3.5e Variant Rule) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Pure Necromancer (5e Class) Most of this page needs to be rewritten for grammar and comprehension.
Pyrotechnician (5e Class) Grammar and syntax need much improvement.
Qinar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Qunari (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Race names are not capitalized.
Races (Sfartalheim Supplement) Race names should not be capitalized.
Raelyn (5e Race) The name of a race should only be capitalized at the beginning of a sentence.
Raesokeran Chiropterus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Marsupialus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown terminology and poor trait placement throughout, size category should be under Size.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Raesokeran Rodentus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Raesokeran Ungulus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Ursus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rage Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Re-equip Ring (5e Equipment) Should be written in second-person, not third-person, and overall writing needs improving, the fluff text needs extracting from the mechanics text or removed entirely.
Re:Ghoul (5e Class) Spelling, grammar and terminology all need considerable improvement. Some text should be rearranged: for example, kagune is mentioned in level 1 features, but not explained until 2nd level.
Reaper (3.5e Race) This race needs some touch up work, many sentences are missing punctuation, race names and other random words should not be capitalized, ect.
Red Orc (5e Race) Words and phrases would be improved if their grammar and formatting better conformed to the norms of D&D 5th edition. E.g., race names like "Red Orc" are common nouns and as such should read "red orc." More guidance on this specifically can be found in the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Aside from this, there are many instances of terms which were present in previous editions, but aren't in 5th; e.g., "Balance, Ride, Escape Artist, Will save." "hp" is always spelled out as hit points, outside of creature stat blocks. Several traits are vague and confusingly worded, making it difficult to know precisely how they are intended to function; in particular, the Orcish Rage and Peon Cower.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ring of Shadows (Pathfinder Equipment) Wording is a bit muddled.
Rite of Rebirth (5e Background) Several sections were taken directly from [1]. This needs to be reworded.
River-Devil (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Ronso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rubert’s Staff (5e Equipment) The wording on many of this staff's spell like properties need to proper terminology from spells to clarify their effects. (Ex: line attacks should follow the wording of lightning bolt, how teleporting works needs to be explained, ect.). The properties on this item also need to state how they can be used (action, bonus action, ect), what rolls are increases by the +3 quarterstaff need to be explained, and the item has various other grammatical issues, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Rugbysta (5e Class) Are grammar and misspellings part of the joke?
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Sacred Artist (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Several features are not properly worded in a mechanical sense. Turn, and round counting. All subclass features should probably be renamed to fit the samurai theme.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Warden (5e Class) There are numerous words or phrased Capitalized when standards dictated they should not be. Class names, background names, weapon names, and others are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize has further details.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Saru No Otoko (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Seedling (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and spells aren't capitalized, spells should be italicized and link to the SRD, "once per rest" wording, "You are proficient in the Persuasion skill." not "You have proficiency in Persuasion.", etc...
Seeker (5e Race) Traits make little to no sense and need to abide by the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Seeker of Truth (5e Class) Class names, class features, and other many other words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Sendo Monk (5e Class) Does not follow the standards. See talk page.
Sentient Automaton (5e Race) This race has some confusing writing and lots of small grammatical mistakes such as capitalizing races when they shouldn't be, not capitalizing ability scores, the Purpose Built trait is incorrectly worded, and various other small grammar mistakes can be found throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadowfell Walker (5e Race) This race's traits need to be rewritten or otherwise clarified and much of the terminology needs to be fixed. Spellcasting ability should be used instead of casting modifier. Use hit points instead of hp. Race names are not capitalized, ect.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadows Dweller (3.5e Class) May be grammatical errors.
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Shambali (5e Class) Numerous spelling, capitalization and grammar issues.
Sharkin Skeleton (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Shub (5e Race) Wording needs improving. You don't have +1 to a "stat". You don't "force" a saving throw, and so on.
Sidhe (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, spells shouldn't be capitalized and should be italicized, "Your Dexterity score increases by 1 and your Charisma score increases by 2." not "+2 Charisma, +1 Dexterity.", etc...
User:Sie Talpa de Redstoneville/Conqueratomurs (5e Race) Spelling, grammar, and terminology need much improvement. This race is supposedly made for 5th edition, but frequently uses terms from other editions of D&D.
Siege Ladder (5e Equipment) Hard to read. See talk page.
Sigil en Din (3.5e Equipment) Some areas could use stronger wording.
Sigmar's Fury (5e Equipment) Poor wording throughout.
Simic Hybrid, Variant (5e Race) This page has a number of different grammatical problems, lists things that are not terms in 5e(expertise is a class feature, per day wording is not used, see the dragonborn's breath weapon as an example), among a number of other problems.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slender Nightmare (5e Feat) This feat should not use the "per day" wording, see 1st party feats for how features with uses are worded. In addition, there are grammatical errors everywhere, with most being capitalization and punctuation.
Slimanoid Blorbs (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Sliver (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Such as languages, race names, alignment, size category, skills, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Solar wrath (3.5e Spell) The grammar and capitalization need to be fixed in the description.
Sombra Escura (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Songstress (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, and don't use proper DnD language.
Soul Blade (5e Spell) The wording for this spell really needs to be adjusted as it isn't clear how it works.
Soul Bomb (5e Spell) Spelling and grammatical errors throughout.
Soul Keeper (3.5e Class) This is not in english.
Soul Phantom (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soulbound (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Spartan (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors on the subclasses.
Spatial Summoner (5e Class) There are a lot of incorrect capitalization and grammar issues.
Speed Demon (5e Feat) What is a "skill modifier"? Proficiency bonus? Ability modifier? Surely this feat doesn't mean to increase speed for every skill in which you have proficiency?
Speedster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. (editor's note, that's a huge issue, because I don't know American, so I'm not gonna be able to 'fix' my stuff).
Spiral Deformity (5e Equipment) The weapons name should be written in full, capitalized, and italicized. The weapon property need to be written to be more concise.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Spooky Curse (5e Curse) Many grammatical or terminological errors. "Physical" is not a damage type. Who is the "they/their" whose bones you are seeing? How and why are you damaging yourself? "Self harm" isn't a good enough explanation.
Stained Half-Elf (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "Stained Elves gain proficiency in the Arcana skill"
Star Warriors (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Starbreaker (5e Equipment) Minor grammatical errors found throughout. See the talk page for a few examples.
Stoatlet (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Storage Magician (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Storm Stone (5e Equipment) Sentience could be worded in a way that feels natural.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Strange Hands (5e Hazard) Spelling and grammar errors abound.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
Swarm Golems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Swashbuckler, Variant (5e Class) Uses "per x rest" wording.
Sword of Dismemberment (5e Equipment) It could use some 5e-ification, and would benefit from less complexity.
T-1000 (5e Creature) features/traits are not worded properly such as regeneration. When are the hit points gained? Is there action associated with creating weapons for natural weapons?
Taninim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tasmer (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Teardrop (Kite) Shield (5e Equipment) The description is unintelligible, and not adequate.
Teleporter (5e Class) Wording needs improving. For example, the value calculations in "Shifted in the Planes", "Warp Strike" etc are clumsily written.
Templar (3.5e Class) Grammar needs improving.
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
Tevi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Tevi are Medium size class creatures.", "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution increases by 1.", conditional advantages should be worded like the dwarves Stonecunning trait, use "feet" instead of "ft", etc...
The 6D (5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving (for example, Constitution and DC should be capitalized)
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help (race names are not capitalized).
The Black Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Cold (5e Disease) The effect needs to be worded more clearly.
The Gray Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Great Ones (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
The Green Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Hillgiant's Holy Hamwich (5e Equipment) Unclear how this interacts with other magical items, how it's level is increased, etc.
The Oldest Trick (5e Trap) Spelling and grammar problems throughout.
The Red Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Thunder Ranger (5e Subclass) This subclass has various grammatical issues, ranging from capitalization problems, missing punctuation, usage of "per long rest" instead of standardized wording used to indicate when features can be used again, ect.
The Transistor (5e Subclass) Capitalization.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The White Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me. The entire bit about geralt being the only ever white hair witcher is also wrong. Wanted to try this but reading how wrong the OP was turned me off it.
The dark-one (5e Race) Overall grammar would benefit from revision. Punctuation and capitalization is preferably used.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Threat Minimization Charm (5e Charm) This charm can be used as a reaction to what? Reactions have to have a specified trigger. "Fine" is not a size category in 5E. "Per long rest".
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Thundercat (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, Claws should be worded like the tabaxi natural weapon, It is "d4" not "D4"
Tiki-Taka (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Many of the traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, advantages should be written like the stonecunning trait, spells should be italicized and not capitalized, traits/ability score improvement should be fully written, etc...
Timebender (5e Class) Features are poorly worded.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Tinkerer (5e Class) Some features could use rewording.
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Trap Tinkerer (5e Class) Has one or more grammatical errors in every single sentence.
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Tremorian (5e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, size categories should be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Ability score improvements and langauges should be full written out as per the PHB.
Trenosant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Trophy Fighter (5e Race) Proofreading would be beneficial. Run-on sentence problems.
True Alpha (5e Creature) Numerous spelling mistakes throughout.
True Vampire Lancer (5e Class) Class features are not adequately described. See 5e Class Design Guide.
TruthWeaver (5e Class) This class should not use the "per long rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline). This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Umbra Witch (5e Class) There are a lot of things that should not be capitalized, as well as incorrect language in the class features.
Undead Sharkin (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
UrRu (5e Race) Besides darkvision, this race's traits do not conform with mechanics used in 5e and general 5e verbiage. For example mentions of many skills not in 5e, the "racial bonus" term, mentions of creature types not in 5e (Outsider), ect.
Uruk (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Several broken sentences and incomplete wording.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vanguard (5e Class) This class has several unclear features, also there is no term for physical saving throws and free actions in 5e. See the wiki's Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Variabilli (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Vellus (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "they are usually on the tall side of medium", basic capitalization, etc...
Vince The Vine (5e Equipment) Grammar and capitalization need to be fixed throughout. Many of the traits need to be reworded for clarity.
Virite (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help as it highlights issues present such as races names being capitalized and use of "it's" instead of "its".
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Vitreon (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Void Blade (5e Equipment) Properties are written in shorthand, description has some grammar issues.
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Warchief (5e Class) You should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Way of Invulnerability (5e Subclass) The note at the beginning should belong in a Design Note or on the talk page. Some typos such as "strenght" and "additionnal". The wording for many features could use a lot of work; for example, instead of saying "you may sacrifice 5 AC (-5 to your AC) until the start of your next turn" it would be much simpler to say "you may reduce your AC by 5 until the start of your next turn". What is a "missile" ranged attack? If you are referring to physical projectiles and not magical projectiles, you'd say a "ranged weapon attack", not a "missile" or a "missile ranged attack". "Once per short or long rest" - this is incorrect, please read the Class Design Guide for an explanation of why.
Way of the Abandon Ache (5e Subclass) Class features are sentence fragments at best.
Way of the Electro-Combatant (5e Subclass) This subclass has a number of wording problems and unclear text. What features count as using "Electroshock" damage? Shock damage should be changed to lightning or thunder damage. Several insances of using "per some duration" wording instead of the standard wording class features should use and round counting should also not be used. Ect. other things.
Way of the Empty Hand (5e Subclass) Wiklinks need adding, writing needs improving (e.g. what does "ability to insight yourself" mean?), references to feats should be completely removed
Way of the Mastered Hand (5e Subclass) Running a spell check would be beneficial. Ideally terms would better conform to the standards of D&D 5e formatting norms, such as capitalizing "dc," only using the word "skill" when it applies to skills, etc.
Way of the Strangler King (5e Subclass) This article needs to be rewritten to fix the grammar and wording of all of the features.
WereWorg (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your base size is medium.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "As a Wereworg, you gain a +2 bonus to Dexterity and a +1 bonus to Constitution.", etc...
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Werebear (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Werebear (5e Template) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Werewolf (5e Class) Capitalization errors, text written as casual conversation, could benefit from tighter wording.
Whirling Axes (3.5e Equipment) Poor wording in many places.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Windwalker (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the X times per day wording or per long rest. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Witch Doctor (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar issues.
Wolf Walker (5e Race) Needs a run through for grammar, specifically capitalization.
Wraith, Variant (5e Race) Many features are poorly worded. Features should be written in 2nd person (you).
Wraith Host (5e Class) This entire class features some slopping grammar and spelling.
Wyrm-Dragonborn Class (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Xenomorph Life Cycle (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, many features' effects are unclear/not properly descripted, and the class overall has numerous other example of improper grammar and terminology. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yalu (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notations.
User:ZarHakkar/Folk Deity (5e Class) Improper use of terms: per hour regeneration isn't a thing in 5e, remove uses of ellipses, Faith (level 9) implies that people didn't know whether the character existed or not (have they been invisible? why don't people know they exist? or have they just not met yet?), Divine Demiplane (level 12) lets you create new demiplanes but doesn't let you visit ones you've previously made, Manifest Destiny (level 19) let's you stay in Manifest Destiny form for 30 minutes which is then brought down to a minute and a half (15 rounds, at six seconds a round) with Ascended Deity (level 20), teleport speed isn't a thing, et cetera.
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