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3 Stage Mass Combat (5e Variant Rule) This is incredibly cluttered with a huge number of grammatical and spelling errors that culminate in this being completely indecipherable.
617 Pages (5e Spell) The rules for how this spell works and what CR creature you can summon is written in a way that makes it hard to understand.
Abyssal Chicken-Born (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", etc...
Ali'di Crystal Mage (5e Class) some orthography errors, mistakes in capitalization and not using of standard writing (like instances of "per long rest" or "level 2" instead of "2nd level"
Almace (5e Equipment) The exception clause is poorly worded. It should be integrated naturally with the property.
Aloii, Variant (5e Race) race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Amphibimen (5e Race) Arbitary use of Italicization, skills/size need to be capitalized, race and subrace names should not be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are also several miswritten traits that should be cleaned up to match the first party wording.
Animated Shield (5e Race) Spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Animist (5e Class) the Unravel feature reads as follow: "Beginning at 9th level, you may use your wisdom save instead of the normal save. What is this supposed to mean?
Anthousai (5e Race) Race names should not be capitalized outside of the usual sentence format. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Antimagic (5e Variant Rule) This could use some cleanup to make it easier to read and understand exactly what this rule does.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Arcania (5e Race) Grammar needs work and traits are not worded correctly mechanically.
Ardalkhayan Gnomes (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armored Robe of the Ancient Guardian (5e Equipment) Many errors of capitalization, grammar, and punctuation.
Artificer, 3rd Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 4th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 5th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 7th Variant (5e Class) Cunning Inventors and Intense Rivalries sections are word for word copies from the same sections on the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Asari, Variant (5e Race) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Asmodeus (5e Creature) The description of this creature needs to be replaced with material that wasn't plagiarized from another book.
Aviator, Variant (5e Class) Far too much of the text is a word for word copy from the Aviator. Maybe do at least some minor changes on the fluff text.
Beast Dominator (5e Class) The text needs to be translated to English.
Beastmen (5e Race) Traits are worded incorrectly/poorly, consult the 5e Race Design Guide.
Bell-Walker (5e Class) Errors of capitalization throughout the text. The wording of the features doesn't follow the standard of the official classes.
Betraying Blessing (5e Disease) This page fails to utilize proper 5e terminology.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade ot Tathagata (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need help.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Blood Sorcerer (5e Subclass) All of the features need to be rewritten for clarity.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Bounty Hunter, Eberron (5e Class) several uses of "per long rest" wording
Brachiosaurus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. It's level not lvl, Hit Points not Hp, 1d4 not 1D4,etc.
Build A God (5e Class) Numerous grammatical mistakes in its singular ability.
Burning Thingy (5e Disease) Numerous grammar and punctuation problems.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Card Trader (5e Class) This class is full of grammatical issues with many feature having non-standard wording, incorrect capitalization, and other issues. Besides that, the class is very confusing, as a ton of features refer to each other which leads to the class being very convoluted.
Caribespeon (5e Race) "You have a flying speed of 6 double jumps" and other glaring errors.
Chick Thrower (5e Class) Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Child Of Cosmos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Chiropterans (5e Race) The lore and the racial traits individually and together don't make much sense. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Choker of the Stolen Voice (5e Equipment) A lot of this items wording needs to be cleaned up. There are several examples of improper wording such as needs attunement, once per long rest, ect. along with many instances of improper grammar.
Chronomancer (5e Class) Armors don't have the "finesse" property, as mentioned on the 1st feature of the Guardian of the Timeless Gaze. And the wording in many places could be more clear and more in line with 5e writing
Circle of Death (5e Subclass) This reads about as smoothly as torn sandpaper.
Circle of the New Moon (5e Subclass) Capitalization issues here and there. Big problem with the Blackened Flowers feat; it is very long compared to the other feats and could use some major rewording in its description.
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crimson Templar (5e Class) Class features need to be written to match 5e standards.
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English.
Cryogenist (5e Subclass) There are run-on and confusing statements that would benefit from a more mechanical rewording.
Cryomancer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) 5e terms are hardly used.
Crystalisk (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cup (5e Race) See the 5e Race Design Guide.
Dancer, 4th Variant (5e Class) The description text of this class is a word for word copy from the Dancer, and should be changed to be a real "variant" of the original class.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Spear (5e Equipment) DCs based on hit points is also "sloppy". There's a lot to keep track of or ask and consider when making an attack. This item is very dense. It would benefit from condensing if possible.
Dark Weapon (5e Class) Needs help with grammar and readability.
Daywalker (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, alignments aren't capitalized, Age/Alignment/Size should be fully written out, Basic sentence structuring, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", etc...
Dealer, Variant (5e Class) Capitalization mistakes throughout.
Death Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Needs a run through for wording, and especially abbreviations. Think I got most of them.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dice-kin (5e Race) Difficult to read.
Dire Damage (5e Variant Rule) Large number of grammar, spelling, and capitalization errors. Many things need to be rewritten for clarity. "same as" should typically be copied, and have the keywords specific to that part replaced. "will save" isn't a thing in 5e, if it's another variant please link to it. 'Note' is used very liberally throughout the page, and should be reexamined for impact. These notes can likely be restructured to flow naturally from one point to another. As this is a rule, mechanics should be firm and well defined, instead of wishy washy (Ex. "rolls likely being 19 or 21").
Dire Death (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and terminology issues throughout.
Dire Survival Rules (5e Variant Rule) Numerous grammar/spelling mistakes, and a lack of punctuation make this very difficult to read. Many mechanics are poorly phrased, or confusing. Mechanics need to be firm and well defined. As printed, several sections read like a casual letter to DMs instead of a rule.
Doom Shaper (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording, and some miss-capitalization.
Doom Slayer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Unconventional wording, see 5e Class Design Guide.
Doomed Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Draakra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "You are medium sized.", "You have advantage on saving throws against being knocked prone." not "You have advantage against being knocked prone.", etc...
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Dragon Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Uses "per day" wording, among other issues
Dragon Rises from the Sea (5e Spell) Does not use proper WoTC terminology, fails to actually explain the effects of the spell in a usable manner
Dragonborn Angel (5e Subrace) Inncorrect capitalization/wording throughout. Damage types, movement types, armor, etc are not capitalized. "feet/foot" should be written instead of "ft".
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize
Earth Clan (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout such as alignments, race names, etc and vague traits written like notes when they should use first-party wording. Brackets should be avoided as traits should be written like full sentences. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ed Kid (5e Race) Requires a rewrite to use 5th edition terminology and many traits need to actually make sense.
Eldritch Gunslinger (5e Class) This class has a few grammatical errors found throughout. Things like class names not being capitalized, grit not being capitalized, and misspelled words all need to be fixed.
Eldritch Hunter (5e Class) So many sentence fragments and run-on sentences that it's difficult to read almost everything on this page.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Emotions (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Enchanter (5e Class) Grammar and spelling errors throughout
Energizing Smite (5e Spell) Only stuns the target for 1 turn, says that they can make a save against being stunned at the end of their turn. Redundant wording.
Ensemble of Elegance (5e Spell) The wording on this still seems to be a bit awkward and confusing.
Evorian (5e Race) Traits needs to be worded with mechanical benefits. What does making out details on objects do?
Ex-machina (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Fae Fang (5e Class) Uses "per day" recharging. Class features in 5e recharge on a short or long rest. The name of the spells should not be capitalized.
Faenur (5e Race) Help in capitalization, grammar cleanup needed
Fallen Angel, Variant (5e Race) Traits need to be rewritten to mimic the first party as they are currently ineloquent and vague.
Fallen Divinity (5e Class) A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, skills should be capitalized, ft instead of feet, 8d4 not 8D4, damage types shouldn't be capitalized, etc...
Fary (5e Race) This page lacks the correct wording for various things such as ability scores("Your Dexterity increases by 2." not "+2 Dexterity"), traits(), languages(can they speak, read or write these languages or just understand them? This isn't clear.), etc.
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Field of Vineyards (5e Spell) This spell has multiple issues with its range and the area it affects, as well as with the spell's actual effects. It is unclear what all this spell is meant to do, and it feels as though things were simply tacked on to make it cooler.
Fifth (5e Race) Wording does not follow standards, see the 5e Race Design Guide.
Firebane (5e Equipment) Energy absorption part 2 is very confusing, and would benefit from clarification/a rewrite. "you can roll on attack on a spell" what does this mean? Is "on a hit" supposed to be "on a successful save"?
Flora Colossus (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Form Thief (5e Subclass) Everything past the actual features here makes no sense.
Freelancer (5e Class) The inserted text should not start with an exclamation point. The class features need to state at which level they are gained in the text.
Frost Knight (5e Class) Ability scores shouldn't be abbreviated, and you must write hit points instead of HP. When indicating a ability check, the ability comes before the skill proficiency (Charisma (Intimidation) instead of Intimidation (Charisma).
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Full Counter (5e Spell) Effect needs streamlining and clarification
Gallifreyan, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like bullet points on a character sheet. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "Your Strength score increases by 2" not "Strength +2", race names are capitalized, etc...
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Gem Wielder (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. There are an abundance of exception clauses.
Gem of Javamak (5e Artifact) All one big paragraph
Gems, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Glacier (5e Spell) Grammar problems are in abundance on this page.
Gladiator Beast (5e Subrace) Sentences are not complete. Traits are incorrect.
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Grappler, Variant (5e Class) Does not follow conventional wording. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Gravitation manipulator (5e Class) The first word of each sentence needs to be capitalized.
Gravitonic Archer (5e Class) Full of incorrect terminology. STR and INT need to be worded right, the action types need to be explained correctly, and the wording needs to be finely combed through.
Guard movement (5e Feat) Terminology needs improvement.
Half-Celestial Born (5e Race) Traits need to be written in full and follow the first parties wording scheme.
Half-human (Quarter-orc, quarter-elf) (5e Race) Despite all the traits used being already written and the race doing nothing different the traits are still written incorrectly. See the PHB for the correct wording and consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize if in doubt.
Half Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Halfa (Half Ghost) The race information (Physical Description, History, etc.) should be organized into sentences and paragraphs, and not like a quick information sheet.
Hanson Clan Static (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/bolding/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference correctly. Nonmagical lightning damage, random capitalizations, external-internal links to SRD's,
Haunted Skull (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Hollower (5e Class) The grammar, spelling, and capitalization need to be fixed.
Holy Weapon User (5e Class) The grammar and phrasing of the features need a lot of work.
Human Tradesman (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or clearly misinterpret terminology used. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "considered medium", "Performance(Instrument)" when "instrument" is not a skill, "Your Constitution, Wisdom or Intelligence score increases by 2 and one other ability score of your choice increases by 1." not "Gain +2 to Intelligence, Constitution or Wisdom and +1 to another ability of your choice. As normal, you can not increase an ability beyond 20 in this way.", etc...
Humanoid Tarrasque (5e Creature) Actions should be capitalized.
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Hydris (5e Race) The traits are worded poorly, not just in terms of failing to meet the sites Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize guide and basic grammatical standards but also in terms of matching first-party wording. The traits are often convoluted and need to be rewritten to be more concise and mechanically significant.
Illuminator (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Immortal (5e Class) Uses "per long rest". Abbreviates a lot of names (using "con" instead of "constitution", "mod" instead of modifier" and so on).
Incarnated Barrier of the Void (5e Equipment) Features need significantly improving for grammar and terminology.
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Japanese Kitsune (5e Race) Unclear and confusing wording. Also Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Jarkad (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need improvement.
Kaeozz (5e Creature) This creature does not follow standard 5e wording. Neither does it follows wiki format guidelines. Draelm (talk) 16:02, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzes Sword of Darkness (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. You can find some general guidelines in the Equipment Design article. Draelm (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Dragon (5e Creature) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Draelm (talk) 16:19, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Dragon Pulled Plane (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Draelm (talk) 16:21, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Trained Dragon (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Also, this should probably be a creature, not a vehicle. Draelm (talk) 16:18, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kender, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Key of the King's Law, Bab-ilu (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Kinetic Deviant (5e Class) Unconventional wording throughout.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune, Variant (5e Race) There are grammatical errors which deviate from standards; see Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize The wording in several places would be improved if it conformed to 5e norms. Ideally the image would have not only an author and site, but a url link to the page from which it originates.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Subrace) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Kobold, 2nd Variant (5e Race Variant) This race variant's traits need to be cleaned up so its traits follow the wording of 1st party traits.
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lair of the Dark Beast of Waves (5e Environment) Grammar mistakes throughout.
Limb Growth (5e Spell) Several grammatical errors and several mechanics are described in confusing ways.
Lithune, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors such as race names and comma's before "however". Missing references such as skills. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Doll, Variant (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Living Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Lizard folk (5e Race Variant) The subrace traits do not use conventional 5e terminology or mechanics.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lizardfolk, 3rd Variant (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need much improvement.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lombax (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lost Dragon (5e Class) The description specifically describes a race. If this is intended to be a race-exclusive class, or a hybrid of race and class, it should be treated primarily as a race and include details like racial traits. Other homebrew examples of this include barbed devil and goron. If it doesn't make any sense to multiclass into "lost dragon," then it probably shouldn't be primarily a class.

Class features and race features should generally be written from a second person perspective ("you"), but many of this class's features use a third-person perspective ("the Dragon") or switch between them. Many words are capitalized in an odd way. Even "For" is capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Class and race names are common nouns and usually should not be capitalized. More on this subject can be found in Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Lowly Peasant (5e Class) The wording is jumbled in some places.
Lucario, 2nd Variant (5e Race) Capitalization and italization. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) lesser aura needs to be detailed appropriately, or the spell needs its own page and linked to. Similar to greater aura. race names are not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. Mega Evolution has listed an ability but no reference in the traits. Bone rush needs mechanics written in the description of spell needs its own article and the bone rush trait links to it in the description.
Lumate (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lupox (5e Race) Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as there are several inconsistencies on the page such as race names, ability scores, etc. Traits should be fully written out not partially and not use abbreviations.
Lycan Hexblade (5e Subclass) See talk page.
Machine (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Machine Lifeform (5e Race) Capitalization of words that do not follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Also in need of some links to the SRD for skills and ability scores.
Magi (5e Race Variant) Many traits are poorly worded.
Man for the job (Human varient) Page name is misspelled.
Martial Artist (5e Class) Incomplete and incorrect wording throughout.
Martial Warden (5e Class) Though there are no grevious errors, revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "9th level" instead of "level 9"; consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Masked (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, have excessive waffle or are written casually. Race names, alignments shouldn't be capitalized for example.
Masks of Forms (5e Equipment) keywords like Brave, Dwarven Toughness, and other racial traits need written out. Players shouldn't be expected to research or refer to other pages to know what their stuff does.
Master Ninja (5e Class) The class features are mostly written in sentence fragments
Master of the Sword (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar problems throughout. Many of the features need to be reworded for clarity.
Matter Thing (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Memory Make Mage (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, or wrote with a seemingly unflavorful, unprofessional tone.
Metalborn (5e Race) race names aren't capitalized
Metamorphic (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Monk's Bow (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar with many capitalization and punctuation problems as well as several instances of terms being improperly worded(use 3rd level instead of level 3, Dexterity instead of dex, ect.). See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Moon Zerker (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. Stacks are called 'moon's fury' but later called 'moon stacks'. What are basic skills in the 'full moon' feature? Many capitalization mistakes. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Multiarch Classing (5e Variant Rule) The whole article has bad english throughout,and the mechanical effects of the rule are hard to understand
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Needleback Slayer of Yurot (5e Creature) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized and the names of features and actions should be in title case.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightborne (5e Subrace) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ninja, Variant (5e Class) Not well worded, uses "per rest" wording. In addition, many words that shouldn't be capitalized are.
Nordic Warrior (5e Class) Muddled wording throughout, and doesn't use correct 5e terms. See SRD for a composite of 5e terms.
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Sentence structure, and some wording.
Oath of Execution (5e Subclass) Poor spelling runs rampant through this page, sentences are not put together properly, and effect descriptions are a hassle to read and understand.
Old One's Gauntlets (5e Equipment) The wording of this item is a mess. The item's properties don't mention how they can be activated, don't mention a range, and since it isn't mentioned you can use the item on creatures you can not see. In addition, there is round counting, usage of the "per duration" wording instead of standard magical item recharge wording, and a variety of other grammatical problems.
Orb of Chimera (5e Equipment) Arcana saving throws don't exist. If it use a skill, is an ability check, not a saving throw.
Origamist ( School Life) Capitalization, and many run-ons throughout
Osmosian (5e Race) Traits are exceedingly wordy and need to be cut down as well as simplified. Other glaring wording errors throughout.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
Owl Kin (5e Race) This page needs some grammatical touch-ups, mainly involving punctuation and sentence structure.
PSI User (5e Class) Many of the features use title case. While the greek symbols are appropriate to the original franchise, they should be changed to their English counterparts so that a player won't have to know the source material in order to know how to say the names of the features.
Pantheran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Path of The Otherworldly (5e Subclass) This page needs some serious grammatical help.
Path of the Chosen (5e Subclass) There are a lot of grammatical errors throughout.
Pebble Dirgen (5e Equipment) Capitalization, and the description could be reworded.
Pet Lover (5e Background) Various grammar and spelling issues.
Phantom Thief Of Hearts (5e Class) CamelCase all over. Sentence structure issues, too.
Phaseling (5e Class) The last line of the last class feature does not have a clear meaning, if any. There is also an issue with the Pocket Portal feature, as it's diameter is defined as being equal to the phaseling's level, but does not specify which unit (feet, squares, miles) is used for the conversion. Even if the unit is feet, however, which it most likely is, this is in no way a small portal, as the feature would suggest. Also, the level at which a feature is gained should be placed at the beginning of that feature's description, not halfway through.
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Pictsie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capitalization.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Possesion Doll (5e Race) Some traits are worded incorrectly, or confusing.
Pren (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague in places. For example, languages/racial trait names/ability scores should be capitalized, special sights should not be, "ft" or "STR" should not be used as they are abbreviations and should be their full text, all creatures are proficient in their unarmed strikes, etc...
Priest (5e Class) this class mentions "free actions", that do not exist in 5e
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Protector (5e Class) Uses the per rest wording.
Protector (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells are not capitalized, ability scores are as is Armor Class, etc... Consult the 5e Race Design Guide for help.
Psychic (5e Class) This class has several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Pure Necromancer (5e Class) Most of this page needs to be rewritten for grammar and comprehension.
Qinar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Qunari (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Race names are not capitalized.
Races (Sfartalheim Supplement) Race names should not be capitalized.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Raesokeran Ursus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Re:Ghoul (5e Class) Spelling, grammar and terminology all need considerable improvement. Features do not saw at what level they are gained.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rising Dragon Soars the Sky (5e Spell) Does not use proper 5e terminology when describing the effects of the spell
Rite of Rebirth (5e Background) Several sections were taken directly from [1]. This needs to be reworded.
Ronso (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rubert’s Staff (5e Equipment) The wording on many of this staff's spell like properties need to proper terminology from spells to clarify their effects. (Ex: line attacks should follow the wording of lightning bolt, how teleporting works needs to be explained, ect.). The properties on this item also need to state how they can be used (action, bonus action, ect), what rolls are increases by the +3 quarterstaff need to be explained, and the item has various other grammatical issues, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Rugbysta (5e Class) Are grammar and misspellings part of the joke?
Rune Blade, Variant (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Runepriest, Variant (5e Class) This class plagiarizes text directly from the 4e runepriest introduction.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Several features are not properly worded in a mechanical sense. Turn, and round counting. All subclass features should probably be renamed to fit the samurai theme.
Seaclaimed Pirate (5e Class) Expertise is not a keyword in 5e. It's a class feature of rogues.
Seedling (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and spells aren't capitalized, spells should be italicized and link to the SRD, "once per rest" wording, "You are proficient in the Persuasion skill." not "You have proficiency in Persuasion.", etc...
Seeker of Truth (5e Class) Class names, class features, and other many other words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Sendo Monk (5e Class) Does not follow the standards. See talk page.
Sentient Automaton (5e Race) This race has some confusing writing and lots of small grammatical mistakes such as capitalizing races when they shouldn't be, not capitalizing ability scores, the Purpose Built trait is incorrectly worded, and various other small grammar mistakes can be found throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Shade Maiden (5e Class) A lot of the wording of this class needs to be cleaned up. This class has several grammatical errors ranging from spelling problems to capitalization issues. In addition, this class's spellcasting needs to be explained more in depth, and really should use the spell point variant rule with modified costs. This class's spell list should also be at the end of the class.
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadow Summoner (5e Feat) No information is given for the stats of the 'shade' creatures
Shadowfell Walker (5e Race) This race's traits need to be rewritten or otherwise clarified and much of the terminology needs to be fixed. Spellcasting ability should be used instead of casting modifier. Use hit points instead of hp. Race names are not capitalized, ect.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadowling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shambali (5e Class) Numerous spelling, capitalization and grammar issues.
Shape (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Sharkin Skeleton (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Sheikah, Variant (5e Class) This class has many wording issues ranging from problems with missing punctuation, incorrect capitalization(class names are not capitalized), and unclear features(as outlined above).
Shieldbearer (5e Class) The "at x level" line should be integrated on the text of the feature and not on his title.
Shub (5e Race) Wording needs improving. You don't have +1 to a "stat". You don't "force" a saving throw, and so on.
Sidhe (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, spells shouldn't be capitalized and should be italicized, "Your Dexterity score increases by 1 and your Charisma score increases by 2." not "+2 Charisma, +1 Dexterity.", etc...
Siege Ladder (5e Equipment) Hard to read. See talk page.
Simic Hybrid, Variant (5e Race) This page has a number of different grammatical problems, lists things that are not terms in 5e(expertise is a class feature, per day wording is not used, see the dragonborn's breath weapon as an example), among a number of other problems.
Sir Jaroid's Sword of Light (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. You can find some general guidelines in the Equipment Design article. Draelm (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Sir Jaroid (5e Creature) This article does not follow standard 5e wording.
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slimanoid Blorbs (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Songstress (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, and don't use proper DnD language.
Soul Bomb (5e Spell) Spelling and grammatical errors throughout.
Soul Phantom (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soulbound (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Spartan (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors on the subclasses.
Spatial Summoner (5e Class) There are a lot of incorrect capitalization and grammar issues.
Speedster (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. (editor's note, that's a huge issue, because I don't know American, so I'm not gonna be able to 'fix' my stuff).
Spin Master (5e Subclass) Terminology does not use rules of D&D 5e.
Spooky Curse (5e Curse) Many grammatical or terminological errors. "Physical" is not a damage type. Who is the "they/their" whose bones you are seeing? How and why are you damaging yourself? "Self harm" isn't a good enough explanation.
Stabby Sniper (5e Equipment) Hard to read.
Stained Half-Elf (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "Stained Elves gain proficiency in the Arcana skill"
Star Warriors (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Starbreaker (5e Equipment) Minor grammatical errors found throughout. See the talk page for a few examples.
Stoatlet (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Storage Magician (5e Class) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Storm Stone (5e Equipment) Sentience could be worded in a way that feels natural.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Summon Karen (5e Spell) The language is a bit vague, and would benefit from beefing up. It would also benefit from being organized in a manner that is a logical progression of information including: the form it takes, game statistics, features, etc. See the find familiar spell.
Swarm Golems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Swashbuckler, Variant (5e Class) Uses "per x rest" wording.
Sword Mage, Variant (5e Class) On the feature Weapon Study you mention that you can become "familiar" with a weapon. But you don't explain what being familiar with a weapon means. I guess that, by "familiar", you mean "bonded", like the Eldritch Knight feature, that you mention in the My Friends feature, but this should be explained on the feature, and not addressing another class.
Sword of Dismemberment (5e Equipment) It could use some 5e-ification, and would benefit from less complexity.
T-1000 (5e Creature) features/traits are not worded properly such as regeneration. When are the hit points gained? Is there action associated with creating weapons for natural weapons?
Taninim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tasmer (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
Tevi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Tevi are Medium size class creatures.", "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution increases by 1.", conditional advantages should be worded like the dwarves Stonecunning trait, use "feet" instead of "ft", etc...
The 6D (5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving (for example, Constitution and DC should be capitalized)
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help (race names are not capitalized).
The Black Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Cold (5e Disease) The effect needs to be worded more clearly.
The Gray Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Great Ones (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
The Green Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Hillgiant's Holy Hamwich (5e Equipment) Unclear how this interacts with other magical items, how it's level is increased, etc.
The Iron Juggernaut (5e Trap) The punctuation and capitalization of this article constantly disrupts the flow, making it difficult to read; The main offender is inserting periods where it needs commas to stitch dependent clauses to sentences A general overhaul of the writing is recommended, as it currently reads like the author was inventing the article at the same time as they were writing it.
The Red Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Silent (Slay the Spire Class) Does not use 5e grammar conventions.
The Thunder Ranger (5e Subclass) This subclass has various grammatical issues, ranging from capitalization problems, missing punctuation, usage of "per long rest" instead of standardized wording used to indicate when features can be used again, ect.
The Transistor (5e Subclass) Capitalization.
The White Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Thornskin (5e Spell) This spell does not adequately describe what it is meant to do. It is missing crucial identifiers, such as who is able to do what when the spell is active.
Threat Minimization Charm (5e Charm) This charm can be used as a reaction to what? Reactions have to have a specified trigger. "Fine" is not a size category in 5E. "Per long rest".
Thundercat (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, Claws should be worded like the tabaxi natural weapon, It is "d4" not "D4"
Tiki-Taka (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Many of the traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, advantages should be written like the stonecunning trait, spells should be italicized and not capitalized, traits/ability score improvement should be fully written, etc...
Timebender (5e Class) Features are poorly worded.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Tinkerer (5e Class) Some features could use rewording.
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Trap Tinkerer (5e Class) Has one or more grammatical errors in every single sentence.
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Tremorian (5e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, size categories should be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Ability score improvements and langauges should be full written out as per the PHB.
Tribute to the Dark Goddess (5e Spell) The effect of this spell is written in a manner that fails to adequately and clearly describe its effect. It is composed entirely of run-on sentences, there are multiple misspellings, and it does not resemble any form of WoTC spell guidelines.
Trophy Fighter (5e Race) Proofreading would be beneficial. Run-on sentence problems.
True Alpha (5e Creature) Numerous capitalization mistakes throughout.
True Vampire Lancer (5e Class) Class features are not adequately described. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Umbra Witch (5e Class) There are a lot of things that should not be capitalized, as well as incorrect language in the class features.
Undead Sharkin (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
UrRu (5e Race) Besides darkvision, this race's traits do not conform with mechanics used in 5e and general 5e verbiage. For example mentions of many skills not in 5e, the "racial bonus" term, mentions of creature types not in 5e (Outsider), ect.
Uruk (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Several broken sentences and incomplete wording.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Vince The Vine (5e Equipment) Grammar and capitalization need to be fixed throughout. Many of the traits need to be reworded for clarity.
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Vitreon (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Voidwoken (5e Class) Uses "per day" and "per short-long rest" throughout the text
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Warchief (5e Class) You should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warmonger (5e Class) Grammar problems throughout.
Warrior of Fenris (5e Class) Incomplete sentences and grammar issues found throughout the page. Also, some features are worded in odd and confusing ways.
Way of the Abandon Ache (5e Subclass) Class features are sentence fragments at best.
Way of the Electro-Combatant (5e Subclass) This subclass has a number of wording problems and unclear text. What features count as using "Electroshock" damage? Shock damage should be changed to lightning or thunder damage. Several insances of using "per some duration" wording instead of the standard wording class features should use and round counting should also not be used. Ect. other things.
Way of the Empty Hand (5e Subclass) Wiklinks need adding, writing needs improving (e.g. what does "ability to insight yourself" mean?), references to feats should be completely removed
Way of the Keijo (5e Subclass) All the explicit sexual parts need to be removed (breast sizes have nothing to do with D&D).
Way of the Mastered Hand (5e Subclass) Running a spell check would be beneficial. Ideally terms would better conform to the standards of D&D 5e formatting norms, such as capitalizing "dc," only using the word "skill" when it applies to skills, etc.
Way of the Strangler King (5e Subclass) This article needs to be rewritten to fix the grammar and wording of all of the features.
WereWorg (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your base size is medium.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "As a Wereworg, you gain a +2 bonus to Dexterity and a +1 bonus to Constitution.", etc...
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Witch Doctor (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar issues.
Wolf Walker (5e Race) Needs a run through for grammar, specifically capitalization.
Wood-handed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Wraith, Variant (5e Race) Many features are poorly worded. Features should be written in 2nd person (you).
Wraith Host (5e Class) This entire class features some slopping grammar and spelling.
Xenomorph Life Cycle (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, many features' effects are unclear/not properly descripted, and the class overall has numerous other example of improper grammar and terminology. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yalu (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notations.

4e Pages[edit]

4e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Dragonkin (4e Race) Several spelling errors and grammar issues
Kenitic Empower (4e Ritual) The wording is a bit confusing.
Lords of the secret citadel (4e Quest) Capitalization, and wording could be stronger.

3.5e Pages[edit]

3.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Ash ones (3.5e Race) The grammar and spelling in this article is lacking.
Battle-hardened (3.5e Race) Traits and skills need to be capitalized.
Biomage (3.5e Class) Formatting and wording needs some work.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Cannon Fodder Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording is rather confusing.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Darvatoura's Crazy Carriage (3.5e Equipment) Numerous spelling issues.
Dead Iron (3.5e Equipment) This is a mess to read and confusing.
Disciples (3.5e Race) The grammar needs to be fixed and some of the sentences are confusing.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Dragon Fang (3.5e Equipment) Spell turning needs formalizing, perhaps just by saying you can cast SRD:Spell Turning so many times per day.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Drow Stepmaker (3.5e Class) Diffult to read; poor flow, and some grammar.
Dwarves, Sundered (3.5e Race) "This race was originally published in The Complete Book of Dwarves for AD&D 2nd Edition." should be reworded.
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Elementalist, 2nd Variant (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Elementalist (3.5e Class) The whole spell section should be simplified, or trimmed down.
Eliëis (3.5e Race) Some sections have poor flow, and would benefit from a revision.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Evomancer (3.5e Class) Grammar and formatting needs working on.
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Flamefist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) spelling/grammar
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Hunter of the Undead (3.5e Prestige Class) What is "suffered the loss of a complete level"? Do you mean a negative level?
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Kenseijin (3.5e Class) Multiple spelling and grammar issues.
Kettle of Toin (3.5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving.
Knight, Teoryran (3.5e Class) Does not read through well.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Kurotsume (3.5e Race) Spelling errors.
Landless Lord (3.5e Class) Grammar is all over the place.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Larkoush (3.5e Deity) Writing is substandard. Grammar needs improving.
Life Givetaker (3.5e Class) The abilities are confusing to the degree that they are not understandable.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Love Princess (3.5e Class) Spells should be lowercase.
Meteor Hammer, Variant (3.5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar needs improving
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Movanic Deva (3.5e Racial Class) Does not read through well.
Naruto Ninja, Variant (3.5e Class) This class's features are often confusing/don't make sense while also having a ton of grammar mistakes found throughout the page. All, in all could use some significant clean up. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Nobody (3.5e Template) spelling
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Pheonix born (3.5e Class) Writing needs improving.......Yeah but I think it is perfectly able to be used in any game as is.(ArtixVonKreiger)
Provisions of "Magic" (3.5e Variant Rule) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized.
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Reaper (3.5e Race) This race needs some touch up work, many sentences are missing punctuation, race names and other random words should not be capitalized, ect.
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Samurai Religion (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Sangheili (Halo elites) Spelling and grammar need work.
Shadows Dweller (3.5e Class) May be grammatical errors.
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Sigil en Din (3.5e Equipment) Some areas could use stronger wording.
Soul Keeper (3.5e Class) This is not in english.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Unapprochable East (3.5e Sourcebook) Spelling and grammar need working on. Could to with an introductory paragraph.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me. The entire bit about geralt being the only ever white hair witcher is also wrong. Wanted to try this but reading how wrong the OP was turned me off it.
Theurge (3.5e Class) Poor spelling and grammar throughout.
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Void Archer (3.5e Class) Description is grammatically poor, nonsensical in places.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Whirling Axes (3.5e Equipment) Poor wording in many places.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.

2.5e Pages[edit]

2.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes

Pathfinder Pages[edit]

Pathfinder Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Ring of Shadows (Pathfinder Equipment) Wording is a bit muddled.

d20M Pages[edit]

d20M Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.

Uncategorized Pages[edit]

Pages with no edition category

Uncategorized Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Augmented (5e Class) Numerous run-on sentences, failure to properly capitalize or punctuate, failure to describe effects clearly and concisely in 5e-analogous wording
Turtle Gun (5e Equipment) Does not use 5e terminology
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