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3 Stage Mass Combat (5e Variant Rule) This is incredibly cluttered with a huge number of grammatical and spelling errors that culminate in this being completely indecipherable.
617 Pages (5e Spell) The rules for how this spell works and what CR creature you can summon is written in a way that makes it hard to understand.
Abyssal Chicken-Born (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", etc...
Ali'di Crystal Mage (5e Class) some orthography errors, mistakes in capitalization and not using of standard writing (like instances of "per long rest" or "level 2" instead of "2nd level"
Aloii, Variant (5e Race) race names shouldn't be capitalized. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Amphibimen (5e Race) Arbitary use of Italicization, skills/size need to be capitalized, race and subrace names should not be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are also several miswritten traits that should be cleaned up to match the first party wording.
Ancient Shield (5e Equipment) Unclear whether this item's AC bonus is as normal for shields or in addition to that granted by shields. If the latter, needs balance.
Animated Shield (5e Race) Spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors. Missing references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Animist (5e Class) the Unravel feature reads as follow: "Beginning at 9th level, you may use your wisdom save instead of the normal save. What is this supposed to mean?
Antimagic (5e Variant Rule) This could use some cleanup to make it easier to read and understand exactly what this rule does.
Arcane Lobber (5e Class) Spelling and grammar need much improvement. The class also has several instances of features that use the "per long/short rest" wording, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline).
Arcania (5e Race) Grammar needs work and traits are not worded correctly mechanically.
Ardalkhayan Gnomes (5e Subrace) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Argus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Arkin (5e Race) there are grammatical errors and wording issues on this page that needs to be addressed before this can be considered a completed work.
Armored Robe of the Ancient Guardian (5e Equipment) Many errors of capitalization, grammar, and punctuation.
Artificer, 3rd Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 4th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 5th Variant (5e Class) the fluff text is exactly the same from the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Artificer, 7th Variant (5e Class) Cunning Inventors and Intense Rivalries sections are word for word copies from the same sections on the https://media.wizards.com/2016/dnd/downloads/1_UA_Artificer_20170109.pdf
Asari, Variant (5e Race) Uses 'per rest' wording.
Asmodeus (5e Creature) The description of this creature needs to be replaced with material that wasn't plagiarized from another book.
Aviator, Variant (5e Class) Far too much of the text is a word for word copy from the Aviator. Maybe do at least some minor changes on the fluff text.
Beast Dominator (5e Class) The text needs to be translated to English.
Bedwarfer (5e Race) Lackluster fluff, multiple grammar problems throughout, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors
Bell-Walker (5e Class) Errors of capitalization throughout the text. The wording of the features doesn't follow the standard of the official classes.
Betraying Blessing (5e Disease) This page fails to utilize proper 5e terminology. The word ability should never be used except to refer explicitly to one of the 6 abilities in DnD.
Black Blooded (5e Class) Terminology needs much improvement.
Blade ot Tathagata (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need help.
Blood Elf, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Blood Sorcerer (5e Subclass) All of the features need to be rewritten for clarity.
Book Dragon (5e Race) Many traits are not worded correctly.
Bounty Hunter, Eberron (5e Class) several uses of "per long rest" wording
Brachiosaurus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Brawler (5e Class) Grammar needs improvement. It's level not lvl, Hit Points not Hp, 1d4 not 1D4,etc.
Burning Thingy (5e Disease) Numerous grammar and punctuation problems.
Cannibal (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Caribespeon (5e Race) "You have a flying speed of 6 double jumps" and other glaring errors.
Centiperson (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Chick Thrower (5e Class) Abound with mis-spelled words, incomprehensible sentences, features, and other such problems.
Child Of Cosmos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout.
Children of Ill-Omens (5e Race) Incomplete, and hard to read.
Circle of Death (5e Subclass) This reads about as smoothly as torn sandpaper.
Clan Eshin Acolyte (5e Class) Every feature on this page can't go a sentence without breaking from 5e terminology.
Creature Features (5e Variant Rule) Incorrect capitalization, and wording throughout.
Creepy Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Crimson Templar (5e Class) Class features need to be written to match 5e standards.
Critical Retort (5e Feat) Rough to read. If a character has a similar skill, isn't good meta.
CrossBreed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English.
Cryogenist (5e Subclass) There are run-on and confusing statements that would benefit from a more mechanical rewording.
Crystallite (5e Race) traits that do something are missing how they do it, action, bonus actions, etc. SRDs missing
Cup (5e Race) See the 5e Race Design Guide.
Dancer, 4th Variant (5e Class) The description text of this class is a word for word copy from the Dancer, and should be changed to be a real "variant" of the original class.
Dark Knight FF (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Dark Spear (5e Equipment) DCs based on hit points is also "sloppy". There's a lot to keep track of or ask and consider when making an attack. This item is very dense. It would benefit from condensing if possible.
Dark Weapon (5e Class) Needs help with grammar and readability.
Daywalker (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, alignments aren't capitalized, Age/Alignment/Size should be fully written out, Basic sentence structuring, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", etc...
Dealer, Variant (5e Class) Capitalization mistakes throughout.
Death's Incarnate (5e Class) Written too conversationally
Death Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Needs a run through for wording, and especially abbreviations. Think I got most of them.
Demiplanic orb (5e Equipment) Please have a look at spells in the PHB to see if any could be used. 5e SRD:Demiplane springs to mind.
Demonkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Dice-kin (5e Race) Difficult to read.
Dire Damage (5e Variant Rule) Large number of grammar, spelling, and capitalization errors. Many things need to be rewritten for clarity. "same as" should typically be copied, and have the keywords specific to that part replaced. "will save" isn't a thing in 5e, if it's another variant please link to it. 'Note' is used very liberally throughout the page, and should be reexamined for impact. These notes can likely be restructured to flow naturally from one point to another. As this is a rule, mechanics should be firm and well defined, instead of wishy washy (Ex. "rolls likely being 19 or 21").
Dire Death (5e Variant Rule) Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and terminology issues throughout.
Dire Survival Rules (5e Variant Rule) Numerous grammar/spelling mistakes, and a lack of punctuation make this very difficult to read. Many mechanics are poorly phrased, or confusing. Mechanics need to be firm and well defined. As printed, several sections read like a casual letter to DMs instead of a rule.
Doom Slayer, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Unconventional wording, see 5e Class Design Guide.
Doomed Undead (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Draakra (5e Race) A number of grammatical/wording errors throughout. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "You are medium sized.", "You have advantage on saving throws against being knocked prone." not "You have advantage against being knocked prone.", etc...
Draconic Angel, Variant (5e Race) This race features identical wording to Draconic Angel in numerous areas. Charm features round counting.
Dragon (5e Race) This page is filled with grammar errors. Please help make this page easily readable. A page might be designed perfectly, but if it has bad grammar it's worth nothing.
Dragon Claws (5e Equipment) Several misspellings, convoluted wording, failure to be straightforward and easily understandable.
Dragon Knight, 3rd Variant (5e Class) Uses "per day" wording, among other issues
Dragon Rises from the Sea (5e Spell) Does not use proper WoTC terminology, fails to actually explain the effects of the spell in a usable manner
Drakki (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Please read the 5e Race Design Guide and the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize
Earth Clan (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout such as alignments, race names, etc and vague traits written like notes when they should use first-party wording. Brackets should be avoided as traits should be written like full sentences. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Eclipsemancer (5e Class) Several words are spelled wrong in the first feature.
Ed Kid (5e Race) Requires a rewrite to use 5th edition terminology and many traits need to actually make sense.
Eldritch Gunslinger (5e Class) This class has a few grammatical errors found throughout. Things like class names not being capitalized, grit not being capitalized, and misspelled words all need to be fixed.
Eldritch Hunter (5e Class) So many sentence fragments and run-on sentences that it's difficult to read almost everything on this page.
Elemental Demon (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Emotions (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Empath (5e Class) Needs to adhere with Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Energizing Smite (5e Spell) Only stuns the target for 1 turn, says that they can make a save against being stunned at the end of their turn. Redundant wording.
Ensemble of Elegance (5e Spell) The wording on this still seems to be a bit awkward and confusing.
Evorian (5e Race) Traits needs to be worded with mechanical benefits. What does making out details on objects do?
Ex-machina (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Fae Fang (5e Class) Uses "per day" recharging. Class features in 5e recharge on a short or long rest. The name of the spells should not be capitalized.
Faenur (5e Race) Help in capitalization, grammar cleanup needed
Fallen Angel, Variant (5e Race) Traits need to be rewritten to mimic the first party as they are currently ineloquent and vague.
Fallen Divinity (5e Class) A number of spelling/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The features need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, skills should be capitalized, ft instead of feet, 8d4 not 8D4, damage types shouldn't be capitalized, etc...
Felkin (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Ferengi (Star Trek Supplement) Wording needs corrected.
Field of Vineyards (5e Spell) This spell has multiple issues with its range and the area it affects, as well as with the spell's actual effects. It is unclear what all this spell is meant to do, and it feels as though things were simply tacked on to make it cooler.
Fifth (5e Race) Wording does not follow standards, see the 5e Race Design Guide.
Firebane (5e Equipment) Energy absorption part 2 is very confusing, and would benefit from clarification/a rewrite. "you can roll on attack on a spell" what does this mean? Is "on a hit" supposed to be "on a successful save"?
Flora Colossus (5e Race) A number of capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Forge Master (5e Class) Grammar
Form Thief (5e Subclass) Everything past the actual features here makes no sense.
Freelancer (5e Class) The inserted text should not start with an exclamation point. The class features need to state at which level they are gained in the text.
Frost Bringer (5e Class) Terminology is shortened, like using Prof instead of Proficiency, or just using the first three letters of scores.
Frost Knight (5e Class) Ability scores shouldn't be abbreviated, and you must write hit points instead of HP. When indicating a ability check, the ability comes before the skill proficiency (Charisma (Intimidation) instead of Intimidation (Charisma).
Frost Lance (5e Equipment) spells need their own pages created, then linked in the description, capitalization errors
Gallifreyan, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like bullet points on a character sheet. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "Your Strength score increases by 2" not "Strength +2", race names are capitalized, etc...
Gargoyle (5e Race) Damage types shouldn't be capitalized. Several racial traits are worded incorrectly. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Gem Wielder (5e Class) Uses "per rest" wording. There are an abundance of exception clauses.
Gem of Javamak (5e Artifact) All one big paragraph
Gems, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The wiki uses American English over British English. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Gladiator Beast (5e Subrace) Sentences are not complete. Traits are incorrect.
Goliath Panda (5e Race) There are a few issues here mentioned in the Help:When_to_Italicize_and_Capitalize such as race names being capitalized.
Gorger (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar and several unclear features. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Grappler (5e Class) Does not follow conventional wording. See 5e Class Design Guide.
Gravitation manipulator (5e Class) The first word of each sentence needs to be capitalized.
Gravitonic Archer (5e Class) Full of incorrect terminology. STR and INT need to be worded right, the action types need to be explained correctly, and the wording needs to be finely combed through.
Half-Celestial Born (5e Race) Traits need to be written in full and follow the first parties wording scheme.
Half-human (Quarter-orc, quarter-elf) (5e Race) Despite all the traits used being already written and the race doing nothing different the traits are still written incorrectly. See the PHB for the correct wording and consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize if in doubt.
Half Vampire (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Halfa (Half Ghost) The race information (Physical Description, History, etc.) should be organized into sentences and paragraphs, and not like a quick information sheet.
Hanson Clan Static (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/bolding/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help and the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing for how to reference correctly. Nonmagical lightning damage, random capitalizations, external-internal links to SRD's,
Haunted Skull (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Healing Vacuum (5e Hazard) Unclear mechanics.
Heartless (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, no size category is stated, basic sentence structuring and capitalization, it should be something like "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not something like "STR+2, CON+1", resistance is not capitalized, uses abbreviations like mod and Dex, etc...
Heroic Spirit (5e Class) Uses meters occasionally. Please don't.
Hollower (5e Class) The grammar, spelling, and capitalization need to be fixed.
Holy Weapon User (5e Class) The grammar and phrasing of the features need a lot of work.
Human Tradesman (5e Race Variant) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or clearly misinterpret terminology used. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "considered medium", "Performance(Instrument)" when "instrument" is not a skill, "Your Constitution, Wisdom or Intelligence score increases by 2 and one other ability score of your choice increases by 1." not "Gain +2 to Intelligence, Constitution or Wisdom and +1 to another ability of your choice. As normal, you can not increase an ability beyond 20 in this way.", etc...
Hunter, Variant (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. The class should also not use the per short/long rest wording.
Hybrid (5e Race Variant) Wording needs to looked at.
Illuminator (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Immortal (5e Class) Uses "per long rest". Abbreviates a lot of names (using "con" instead of "constitution", "mod" instead of modifier" and so on).
Incarnated Barrier of the Void (5e Equipment) Features need significantly improving for grammar and terminology.
Inkling, 2nd Variant (5e Race) The wording/formatting/grammar is funny/broken in several places throughout the page.
Japanese Kitsune (5e Race) Unclear and confusing wording. Also Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize
Kaeozz (5e Creature) This creature does not follow standard 5e wording. Neither does it follows wiki format guidelines. Draelm (talk) 16:02, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzes Sword of Darkness (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. You can find some general guidelines in the Equipment Design article. Draelm (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Dragon (5e Creature) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Draelm (talk) 16:19, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Dragon Pulled Plane (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Draelm (talk) 16:21, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kaeozzoidian Trained Dragon (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. Also, this should probably be a creature, not a vehicle. Draelm (talk) 16:18, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Kakkarot (5e Subclass) Typos and mechanical vagueness throughout.
Kender, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Key of the King's Law, Bab-ilu (5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar need improving.
Kindred (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Kinetic Deviant (5e Class) Unconventional wording throughout.
Kitsune, 3rd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Kitsune half-blood (5e Subrace) Basic capitalization, grammar and spelling mistakes.
Knights of the Zodiac (5e Class) Just about every sentence on this page is worded either poorly, incorrectly, or just kinda weirdly.
Kobold, 2nd Variant (5e Race Variant) This race variant's traits need to be cleaned up so its traits follow the wording of 1st party traits.
Kritian (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Labaranthine (5e Race) Grammatical and spelling errors, as well as capitalization. See when to Capitalize for help.
Limb Growth (5e Spell) Several grammatical errors and several mechanics are described in confusing ways.
Lithune, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors such as race names and comma's before "however". Missing references such as skills. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Living Doll, Variant (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Living Doll (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Lizard folk (5e Race Variant) The subrace traits do not use conventional 5e terminology or mechanics.
Lizardfolk, 2nd Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lizardfolk, 3rd Variant (5e Race) Spelling and grammar need much improvement.
Lizardfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lord (Fire Emblem) (5e Class) Features like Subdue, Awakening, Lordly Strike, Pomp and Circumstance, and Failnaught are written very strangely. Most on this page could benefit from a rewrite.
Lost Dragon (5e Class) The description specifically describes a race. If this is intended to be a race-exclusive class, or a hybrid of race and class, it should be treated primarily as a race and include details like racial traits. Other homebrew examples of this include barbed devil and goron. If it doesn't make any sense to multiclass into "lost dragon," then it probably shouldn't be primarily a class.

Class features and race features should generally be written from a second person perspective ("you"), but many of this class's features use a third-person perspective ("the Dragon") or switch between them. Many words are capitalized in an odd way. Even "For" is capitalized in the middle of a sentence. Class and race names are common nouns and usually should not be capitalized. More on this subject can be found in Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.

Lowly Peasant (5e Class) The wording is jumbled in some places.
Lucario, 2nd Variant (5e Race) Capitalization and italization. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Lucario, Variant (5e Race) lesser aura needs to be detailed appropriately, or the spell needs its own page and linked to. Similar to greater aura. race names are not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. Mega Evolution has listed an ability but no reference in the traits. Bone rush needs mechanics written in the description of spell needs its own article and the bone rush trait links to it in the description.
Lumate (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Lupox (5e Race) Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as there are several inconsistencies on the page such as race names, ability scores, etc. Traits should be fully written out not partially and not use abbreviations.
Lycan Hexblade (5e Subclass) See talk page.
Machine (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Machine Lifeform (5e Race) Capitalization of words that do not follow Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. Also in need of some links to the SRD for skills and ability scores.
Magi (5e Race Variant) Many traits are poorly worded.
Man for the job (Human varient) Page name is misspelled.
Martial Artist (5e Class) Incomplete and incorrect wording throughout.
Martial Warden (5e Class) Though there are no grevious errors, revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "9th level" instead of "level 9"; consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Masked (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague, have excessive waffle or are written casually. Race names, alignments shouldn't be capitalized for example.
Masks of Forms (5e Equipment) keywords like Brave, Dwarven Toughness, and other racial traits need written out. Players shouldn't be expected to research or refer to other pages to know what their stuff does.
Master Ninja (5e Class) The class features are mostly written in sentence fragments
Master of the Sword (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar problems throughout. Many of the features need to be reworded for clarity.
Matter Thing (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague.
Megalosaurasapians (5e Race)
Memory Make Mage (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, or wrote with a seemingly unflavorful, unprofessional tone.
Metalborn (5e Race) race names aren't capitalized
Metamorphic (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Mongrel (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Monk's Bow (5e Equipment) This weapon has numerous instances of improper grammar with many capitalization and punctuation problems as well as several instances of terms being improperly worded(use 3rd level instead of level 3, Dexterity instead of dex, ect.). See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Moon Lord (5e Creature) Neither "character" nor "player" are valid denominations. In addition, all three legendary actions are poorly worded.
Mortal Draw (5e Feat) Incredibly wordy, would benefit from heavy trimming.
Multiarch Classing (5e Variant Rule) The whole article has bad english throughout,and the mechanical effects of the rule are hard to understand
Multiplectic (5e Race) grammar and formatting mistakes
Mytuos (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Needleback Slayer of Yurot (5e Creature) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized and the names of features and actions should be in title case.
Nerubian (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Nightborne (5e Subrace) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Ninja, Variant (5e Class) Not well worded, uses "per rest" wording. In addition, many words that shouldn't be capitalized are.
Not So Fragile Glass Cannon Gish (5e Optimized Character Build) Sentence structure, and some wording.
Nullifer (5e Class) This class has significant problems with capitalization and punctuation found throughout the class. Besides that, the class has various other minor grammatical errors scattered about.
Oath of Execution (5e Subclass) Poor spelling runs rampant through this page, sentences are not put together properly, and effect descriptions are a hassle to read and understand.
Old One's Gauntlets (5e Equipment) The wording of this item is a mess. The item's properties don't mention how they can be activated, don't mention a range, and since it isn't mentioned you can use the item on creatures you can not see. In addition, there is round counting, usage of the "per duration" wording instead of standard magical item recharge wording, and a variety of other grammatical problems.
Origamist ( School Life) Capitalization, and many run-ons throughout
Osmosian (5e Race) Traits are exceedingly wordy and need to be cut down as well as simplified. Other glaring wording errors throughout.
Other One (5e Race) There are several grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. The traits are overly wordy/ ineloquent when they should be written like the first party does. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help on capitalization.
Owl Kin (5e Race) This page needs some grammatical touch-ups, mainly involving punctuation and sentence structure.
PSI User (5e Class) Many of the features use title case. While the greek symbols are appropriate to the original franchise, they should be changed to their English counterparts so that a player won't have to know the source material in order to know how to say the names of the features.
Pac-Man (5e Race) The language needs to be tightened up a bit so it's not so casual and abridged from proper 5e terminology.
Palademon (5e Race) There are capitalization errors and spelling problems. I fixed some but not all. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Pantheran (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Path of The Otherworldly (5e Subclass) This page needs some serious grammatical help.
Path of the Chosen (5e Subclass) There are a lot of grammatical errors throughout.
Pebble Dirgen (5e Equipment) Capitalization, and the description could be reworded.
Pet Lover (5e Background) Various grammar and spelling issues.
Phaseling (5e Class) The last line of the last class feature does not have a clear meaning, if any. There is also an issue with the Pocket Portal feature, as it's diameter is defined as being equal to the phaseling's level, but does not specify which unit (feet, squares, miles) is used for the conversion. Even if the unit is feet, however, which it most likely is, this is in no way a small portal, as the feature would suggest. Also, the level at which a feature is gained should be placed at the beginning of that feature's description, not halfway through.
Phoenix Kin (5e Race) Traits are poorly worded.
Pictsie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Planes Walker (5e Class) Class feature need to be properly worded. Also capitalization.
Plantling (5e Race) Needs a run through.
Possesion Doll (5e Race) Some traits are worded incorrectly, or confusing.
Pren (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague in places. For example, languages/racial trait names/ability scores should be capitalized, special sights should not be, "ft" or "STR" should not be used as they are abbreviations and should be their full text, all creatures are proficient in their unarmed strikes, etc...
Prestige System V1 (5e Variant Rule) Collaboratively edited pages don't have versions. Doesn't read well.
Prismatic Knight (5e Class) This class shouldn't use the "per long rest" wording and has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Proderes (5e Race) Lots of spelling errors.
Protean (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Protector (5e Class) Uses the per rest wording.
Protector (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, spells are not capitalized, ability scores are as is Armor Class, etc... Consult the 5e Race Design Guide for help.
Pure Necromancer (5e Class) Most of this page needs to be rewritten for grammar and comprehension.
Qinar (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Quick Throw (5e Feat) Nonsensical, no mechanical interaction/extremely garbled mechanical interaction
Qunari (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Race names are not capitalized.
Races (Sfartalheim Supplement) Race names should not be capitalized.
Raesokeran Edentatus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Felis (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references as seen in the 5e Race Design Guide. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Raesokeran Marsupialus (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/formatting errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Uses unknown terminology and poor trait placement throughout, size category should be under Size.
Raesokeran Mustilus (5e Race) "reptiles", "feat effects" are not 5e terms. "once per long rest" wording should not be used. Mustilus and Rodentus are not a first party language, explain it(script/ what it sounds like, etc) or use the first party languages. Incorrect capitalization throughout, consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Traits are vague and incorrectly worded throughout and should use the first party's wording.
Raesokeran Rodentus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Raesokeran Ursus (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rag Doll, Variant (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Missing SRD references. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Re:Ghoul (5e Class) Spelling, grammar and terminology all need considerable improvement.
Rhylithic (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Rising Dragon Soars the Sky (5e Spell) Does not use proper 5e terminology when describing the effects of the spell
Rubert’s Staff (5e Equipment) The wording on many of this staff's spell like properties need to proper terminology from spells to clarify their effects. (Ex: line attacks should follow the wording of lightning bolt, how teleporting works needs to be explained, ect.). The properties on this item also need to state how they can be used (action, bonus action, ect), what rolls are increases by the +3 quarterstaff need to be explained, and the item has various other grammatical issues, see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Rugbysta (5e Class) Are grammar and misspellings part of the joke?
Rune Blade (5e Class) This class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Runepriest, Variant (5e Class) This class plagiarizes text directly from the 4e runepriest introduction.
Salamander Faerie (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, fae, heat damage, race name capitalization, size category capitalization, etc...
Salve-Maker (5e Class) Terminology issues, see talk page.
Samurai, 2nd Variant (5e Class) Several features are not properly worded in a mechanical sense. Turn, and round counting. All subclass features should probably be renamed to fit the samurai theme.
Scythe of Azamara (5e Equipment) Poor explanatory texts.
Sea Assailant (5e Subclass) There is a lot of missed capitalization and punctuation in this subclass, as well as run-on sentences that need to be broken up.
Seaclaimed Pirate (5e Class) Expertise is not a keyword in 5e. It's a class feature of rogues.
Seedling (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, alignments and spells aren't capitalized, spells should be italicized and link to the SRD, "once per rest" wording, "You are proficient in the Persuasion skill." not "You have proficiency in Persuasion.", etc...
Seeker of Truth (5e Class) Class names, class features, and other many other words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. Consult Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Sendo Monk (5e Class) Does not follow the standards. See talk page.
Sentient Automaton (5e Race) This race has some confusing writing and lots of small grammatical mistakes such as capitalizing races when they shouldn't be, not capitalizing ability scores, the Purpose Built trait is incorrectly worded, and various other small grammar mistakes can be found throughout. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Shade Maiden (5e Class) A lot of the wording of this class needs to be cleaned up. This class has several grammatical errors ranging from spelling problems to capitalization issues. In addition, this class's spellcasting needs to be explained more in depth, and really should use the spell point variant rule with modified costs. This class's spell list should also be at the end of the class.
Shadow Adept (5e Subclass) Line breaks are needed
Shadow Lich (5e Feat) No information is given for the stats of the 'shade' creatures
Shadow Sovereign (5e Class) A majority of this page is awkwardly written.
Shadow Stalker (5e Class) "1d20+background/race gp. "? Why not make that thieves' tools, since they are proficient with it. Spells should be in lower-case italics. Many features have awkward wording.
Shadowfell Walker (5e Race) This race's traits need to be rewritten or otherwise clarified and much of the terminology needs to be fixed. Spellcasting ability should be used instead of casting modifier. Use hit points instead of hp. Race names are not capitalized, ect.
Shadowhunter (5e Class) Typos everywhere. Isn't consistent on how the class name should be written. The word "per" shouldn't be anywhere, see Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline)
Shadowling (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Shambali (5e Class) Numerous spelling, capitalization and grammar issues.
Sharkin Skeleton (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
Sheikah, Variant (5e Class) This class has many wording issues ranging from problems with missing punctuation, incorrect capitalization(class names are not capitalized), and unclear features(as outlined above).
Shieldbearer (5e Class) The "at x level" line should be integrated on the text of the feature and not on his title.
Shub (5e Race) Wording needs improving. You don't have +1 to a "stat". You don't "force" a saving throw, and so on.
Siege Ladder (5e Equipment) Hard to read. See talk page.
Simic Hybrid, Variant (5e Race) This page has a number of different grammatical problems, lists things that are not terms in 5e(expertise is a class feature, per day wording is not used, see the dragonborn's breath weapon as an example), among a number of other problems.
Sir Jaroid's Sword of Light (5e Equipment) This article does not follow proper 5e wording. You can find some general guidelines in the Equipment Design article. Draelm (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2020 (MDT)
Sir Jaroid (5e Creature) This article does not follow standard 5e wording.
Skill Scan Goggles (5e Equipment) Many spelling and grammar mistakes throughout
Sky Mage (5e Class) Class is excessively wordy. Consider moving Domain Spells to 5e Spells.
Slimanoid Blorbs (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Sniffing glue (5e Equipment) Capitalization errors and run-ons for days. Why are random sentences bolded? Why is the page filled with <br>s instead of just using the return key, which would make this infinitely easier to fix?
Songstress (5e Class) Many features are poorly worded, and don't use proper DnD language.
Soul Bomb (5e Spell) Spelling and grammatical errors throughout.
Soul Phantom (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Soulbound (5e Race) The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names and conditions aren't capitalized, etc...
Spartan (5e Class) Words capitalized in the middle of sentences and frequent spelling errors on the subclasses.
Spatial Summoner (5e Class) There are a lot of incorrect capitalization and grammar issues.
Spear Master (5e Subclass) The grammar is strange for these features. The usage count comes before the features, the wording doesn't fit 5e standars, and it gives abilities without explaining what it does (see A True Master's second ability- does that allow for infinite range with a lance or am I just an idiot?).
Spellfire Wielder (5e Class) This class's features are also not very descriptive of the actual mechanics in 5e that the class uses, and the class has numerous instances of improper grammar. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Spiderfolk, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. (editor's note, that's a huge issue, because I don't know American, so I'm not gonna be able to 'fix' my stuff).
Spin Master (5e Subclass) Terminology does not use rules of D&D 5e.
Stabby Sniper (5e Equipment) Hard to read.
Stained Half-Elf (5e Race Variant) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "You are proficient in the Arcana skill." not "Stained Elves gain proficiency in the Arcana skill"
Starbreaker (5e Equipment) Minor grammatical errors found throughout. See the talk page for a few examples.
Stoatlet (5e Race) A number of capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Stone Gargoyle (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Storm Quiver (5e Equipment) This page is confusingly written, and seems to do nothing mechanical.
Storm Stone (5e Equipment) Sentience could be worded in a way that feels natural.
Stormborn (5e Class) Revision to meet 5e standards would be appreciated. E.g., "1st level" instead of "level 1." Consider the contents of Help:When to Capitalize and Italicize.
Summon Karen (5e Spell) The language is a bit vague, and would benefit from beefing up. It would also benefit from being organized in a manner that is a logical progression of information including: the form it takes, game statistics, features, etc. See the find familiar spell.
Summon Panzer (5e Spell) Grammar and spelling issues throughout
Supercharger (5e Equipment) This item does nothing.
Swarm Golems (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Swashbuckler, Variant (5e Class) Uses "per x rest" wording.
Sword Mage, Variant (5e Class) On the feature Weapon Study you mention that you can become "familiar" with a weapon. But you don't explain what being familiar with a weapon means. I guess that, by "familiar", you mean "bonded", like the Eldritch Knight feature, that you mention in the My Friends feature, but this should be explained on the feature, and not addressing another class.
T-1000 (5e Creature) features/traits are not worded properly such as regeneration. When are the hit points gained? Is there action associated with creating weapons for natural weapons?
Taninim (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Tasmer (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
Tenno/Warframe (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Terry Crews (5e Deity) Vague, and open to different interpretations. See talk page.
Tevi (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Tevi are Medium size class creatures.", "Your Constitution score increases by 1." not "Your Constitution increases by 1.", conditional advantages should be worded like the dwarves Stonecunning trait, use "feet" instead of "ft", etc...
The 6D (5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving (for example, Constitution and DC should be capitalized)
The Bar-Tir (5e Race) A number of spelling/ grammatical/ punctuation/ capitalization/ italicization/ wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help (race names are not capitalized).
The Black Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The CardSlinger (5e Class) Features have grammar problems, and do not use the correct structure.
The Cold (5e Disease) The effect needs to be worded more clearly.
The Gray Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Great Ones (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout.
The Hillgiant's Holy Hamwich (5e Equipment) Unclear how this interacts with other magical items, how it's level is increased, etc.
The Iron Juggernaut (5e Trap) The punctuation and capitalization of this article constantly disrupts the flow, making it difficult to read; The main offender is inserting periods where it needs commas to stitch dependent clauses to sentences A general overhaul of the writing is recommended, as it currently reads like the author was inventing the article at the same time as they were writing it.
The Pactbreaker (5e Subclass) Some features don't use any game mechanics at all.
The Red Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
The Silent (5e Class) Does not use 5e grammar conventions.
The Transistor (5e Subclass) Capitalization.
The White Plague (5e Disease) Numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
Therianthrope (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation.
Threat Minimization Charm (5e Charm) This charm can be used as a reaction to what? Reactions have to have a specified trigger. "Fine" is not a size category in 5E. "Per long rest".
Thundercat (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. Race names shouldn't be capitalized, Claws should be worded like the tabaxi natural weapon, It is "d4" not "D4"
Tiki-Taka (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Many of the traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, advantages should be written like the stonecunning trait, spells should be italicized and not capitalized, traits/ability score improvement should be fully written, etc...
Time Walk (5e Spell) This page has a worrying lack of capitalization, misuse of words, and is generally just one long run-on sentence.
Timekeeping Chronomancer (5e Class) This page was copy and pasted here. Many instances of "chronomancer" should be replaced with "timekeeping chronomancer."
Tinkerer (5e Class) Some features could use rewording.
Toosh (5e Race) Traits needs to be fully written out and worded - Ability Score Improvement, Language, spelling, grammar, capitalization, etc
Trap Tinkerer (5e Class) Has one or more grammatical errors in every single sentence.
Treant, Variant (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague. For example, race names, and alignments shouldn't be capitalized, "mod" should be "modifier", etc. The Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) should help with some of the incorrect wording.
Tremorian (5e Race) Race names shouldn't be capitalized, size categories should be capitalized, etc. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. Ability score improvements and langauges should be full written out as per the PHB.
Tribute to the Dark Goddess (5e Spell) The effect of this spell is written in a manner that fails to adequately and clearly describe its effect. It is composed entirely of run-on sentences, there are multiple misspellings, and it does not resemble any form of WoTC spell guidelines.
Trophy Fighter (5e Race) Proofreading would be beneficial. Run-on sentence problems.
True Alpha (5e Creature) Numerous capitalization mistakes throughout.
Tychomancer (5e Class) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help.
Umbra Witch (5e Class) There are a lot of things that should not be capitalized, as well as incorrect language in the class features.
Undead Party (5e Spell) Grammar and spelling issues throughout
Undead Sharkin (5e Race Variant) Needs to be checked over.
UrRu (5e Race) Besides darkvision, this race's traits do not conform with mechanics used in 5e and general 5e verbiage. For example mentions of many skills not in 5e, the "racial bonus" term, mentions of creature types not in 5e (Outsider), ect.
Uruk (5e Race) A number of capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. Several broken sentences and incomplete wording.
Vastaya (5e Race) "You can use this once per short rest," and other unconventional phrases would benefit from revision.
Vince The Vine (5e Equipment) Grammar and capitalization need to be fixed throughout. Many of the traits need to be reworded for clarity.
Virtue (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, race names aren't capitalized, it should be once you've completed a long rest not once per long rest(see PHB errata), "Your size is Medium." not "Your size is medium.", "Your Wisdom score increases by 2." not "Gain + 2 to Wisdom.", etc...
Void Champion (5e Class) Needs a rewrite.
Voidwoken (5e Class) Uses "per day" and "per short-long rest" throughout the text
Voodoist (5e Class) Requires large amounts of grammatical help in virtually every area.
Vulskari House Armor (5e Equipment) The mechanics of this page are a bit confusing, could benefit from a minor rewrite.
Warchief (5e Class) You should try and avoid giving static bonuses, and the class should avoid using the X per short or long rest wording. There is also no resistance to ranged attacks and numerous other features have poor wording or simply have terms not descripted in 5e or D&D. See the Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) and the 5e Class Design Guide. It might also help to read up on 5e through the PHB.
Warmonger (5e Class) Grammar problems throughout.
Way of Sollar's Seven Spiked Silver Star (5e Subclass) Wordy abilities and descriptions
Way of the Abandon Ache (5e Subclass) Class features are sentence fragments at best.
Way of the Drunken Fist (5e Subclass) Does not use standard 5e terminology
Way of the Electro-Combatant (5e Subclass) This subclass has a number of wording problems and unclear text. What features count as using "Electroshock" damage? Shock damage should be changed to lightning or thunder damage. Several insances of using "per some duration" wording instead of the standard wording class features should use and round counting should also not be used. Ect. other things.
Way of the Empty Hand (5e Subclass) Wiklinks need adding, writing needs improving (e.g. what does "ability to insight yourself" mean?), references to feats should be completely removed
Way of the Keijo (5e Subclass) All the explicit sexual parts need to be removed (breast sizes have nothing to do with D&D).
Way of the Mastered Hand (5e Subclass) Running a spell check would be beneficial. Ideally terms would better conform to the standards of D&D 5e formatting norms, such as capitalizing "dc," only using the word "skill" when it applies to skills, etc.
Way of the Strangler King (5e Subclass) This article needs to be rewritten to fix the grammar and wording of all of the features.
Weight of 1000 Years, Variant (5e Spell) Cut back on the fluff; it's near incomprehensible as it is
Were-pires (5e Race) Odd capitalization, punctuation, lack of punctuation, and fragment sentences throughout, uses "per day" wording.
WereWorg (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Your base size is medium.", "Your Dexterity score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "As a Wereworg, you gain a +2 bonus to Dexterity and a +1 bonus to Constitution.", etc...
Were human (5e Disease) The two variable game types need to be explained with mechanics.
Witch Doctor (5e Class) Capitalization and grammar issues.
Wolf Walker (5e Race) Needs a run through for grammar, specifically capitalization.
Wood-handed (5e Race) A number of spelling/grammatical/capitalization/italicization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation. For example, "Your size is Medium." not "Medium", "You are proficient in the Athletics skill." not "You are proficient with the Strength (Athletics) skill", "Your Strength score increases by 2 and your Constitution score increases by 1." not "STR+2, CON+1", etc...
Wraith, Variant (5e Race) Many features are poorly worded. Features should be written in 2nd person (you).
Wraith Host (5e Class) This entire class features some slopping grammar and spelling.
Xenomorph Life Cycle (5e Class) Class names are not capitalized, many features' effects are unclear/not properly descripted, and the class overall has numerous other example of improper grammar and terminology. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize as well.
Xilan Warrior (5e Class) See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Yalu (5e Race) A number of grammatical/capitalization/wording errors throughout. Consult the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize for help. The traits need to be mechanically worded correctly as they are often vague or written like casual conversation/ notations.

4e Pages[edit]

4e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Death Knight Minions (4e Creature) Spelling, grammar and formatting needs improving.
Dragonkin (4e Race) Several spelling errors and grammar issues
Kenitic Empower (4e Ritual) The wording is a bit confusing.
Lords of the secret citadel (4e Quest) Capitalization, and wording could be stronger.

3.5e Pages[edit]

3.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Ash ones (3.5e Race) The grammar and spelling in this article is lacking.
Battle-hardened (3.5e Race) Traits and skills need to be capitalized.
Boccob (3.5e Deity) "copied from Wikipedia .... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boccob#Description " should be reworded.
Book of Tech (3.5e Sourcebook)wip its sub-pages have severe grammar and spelling issues.
Cannon Fodder Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording is rather confusing.
Corellon Larethian (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corellon_Larethian" should be reworded.
Creative Genius (3.5e Prestige Class) Class names shouldn't be capitalized; see Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize. There are some other unusual phrases which would benefit from revision, including lines like, "you must take 5 level."
Cubi (3.5e Class) "balanced Tire 3 class."? This is full of typos. Spell list is messy and doesn't adequately explain where the spells can be found.
Cyborgs (3.5e Race) Spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.
Darvatoura's Crazy Carriage (3.5e Equipment) Numerous spelling issues.
Dead Iron (3.5e Equipment) This is a mess to read and confusing.
Disciples (3.5e Race) The grammar needs to be fixed and some of the sentences are confusing.
Diverse Sorcerer (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) please see Natural Evoker (3.5e Alternate Class Feature) for an example of wording
Dragon Fang (3.5e Equipment) Spell turning needs formalizing, perhaps just by saying you can cast SRD:Spell Turning so many times per day.
Dragon Warrior (3.5e Class) Formatting and grammar need improving
Drow Stepmaker (3.5e Class) Diffult to read; poor flow, and some grammar.
Dwarves, Sundered (3.5e Race) "This race was originally published in The Complete Book of Dwarves for AD&D 2nd Edition." should be reworded.
Ehlonna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ehlonna#Description" should be reworded.
Elementalist (3.5e Class) The whole spell section should be simplified, or trimmed down.
Eliëis (3.5e Race) Some sections have poor flow, and would benefit from a revision.
Entings (3.5e Race) Grammar is confusing in places.
Erythnul (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erythnul" should be reworded.
Fixed Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Wording in the description needs improving.
Flamefist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) spelling/grammar
Free-Runner (3.5e Class) Needs wikilinks, the bonus feats for example.
Garl Glittergold (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia ...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garl_Glittergold" should be reworded.
Gruumsh (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gruumsh" should be reworded.
Harpie (3.5e Race) Wording needs some work. Confusingly similar to a harpy.
Holy Kick (3.5e Maneuver) Wording needs improving.
Horrid Blight (3.5e Other) Wording could be improved.
Hunter of the Undead (3.5e Prestige Class) What is "suffered the loss of a complete level"? Do you mean a negative level?
Infinium, Gun Mage (3.5e Class) Riddled with grammatical errors and poor terminology
Kenseijin (3.5e Class) Multiple spelling and grammar issues.
Kettle of Toin (3.5e Equipment) Grammar and terminology needs improving.
Kord (3.5e Deity) "copied from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kord_(Greyhawk)#Description" should be reworded
Kurotsume (3.5e Race) Spelling errors.
Languages (3.5e Other) Formatting, spelling, and grammar need overhauling.
Larkoush (3.5e Deity) Writing is substandard. Grammar needs improving.
Life Givetaker (3.5e Class) The abilities are confusing to the degree that they are not understandable.
Loose Limbs (3.5e Variant Rule) Grammar needs improving
Love Princess (3.5e Class) Spells should be lowercase.
Meteor Hammer, Variant (3.5e Equipment) Spelling and grammar needs improving
Moradin (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia .....http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moradin" should be reworded.
Naruto Ninja, Variant (3.5e Class) This class's features are often confusing/don't make sense while also having a ton of grammar mistakes found throughout the page. All, in all could use some significant clean up. See Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize.
Nobody (3.5e Template) spelling
Olidammara (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olidammara#Dungeons_.26_Dragons_3.5_edition_.282003-2007.29 " should be reworded
Provisions of "Magic" (3.5e Variant Rule) Words at the beginning of sentences need to be capitalized.
Pumpkin child (3.5e Race) Terminology issues throughout ("health points"?)
Ronin of the Blade (3.5e Class) Grammar errors throughout.
Samurai Resources (Teoryran World Supplement) Spelling. Grammar. Formatting.
Shadows to Steel (Shadow Power) needs touch-up of wording
Sigil en Din (3.5e Equipment) Some areas could use stronger wording.
Spell Blade, Variant (3.5e Prestige Class) D&D wiki uses US English.
Spontaneous Gnome Shadow Illusionist (3.5e Optimized Character Build) Hard to read in some places.
Super Hero (3.5e Class) Grammar and spelling. A lot of terms are contracted or abbreviated when they shouldn't be.
The True Samurai (3.5e Class) Class names and weapon names are not proper nouns.
The Witcher (3.5e Class) Some work needs doing improving the language and terminology. I've read through Witcher Styles twice and it's incomprehensible to me. The entire bit about geralt being the only ever white hair witcher is also wrong. Wanted to try this but reading how wrong the OP was turned me off it.
Thunder Cleaves (3.5e Prestige Class) Abilities are not written out for most of the progression.
Uchiha (3.5e Race) Grammar and descriptions need improving.
Unliving Savant (3.5e Class) Spelling and grammar need work.
Valinor Guard (3.5e Class) See above
Vecna (3.5e Deity) "Copied from Wikipedia http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vecna". Could use rewording.
Wastelander (3.5e Class) Writing is poor.
Whirling Axes (3.5e Equipment) Poor wording in many places.
White Cleric (3.5e Class) grammar needs some work.
Wrist Cannon (3.5e Equipment) Practically unintelligible

2.5e Pages[edit]

2.5e Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes

Pathfinder Pages[edit]

Pathfinder Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Cliopodans (Pathfinder Race) This race's ability and alternate traits could use being more succinct and to-the-point.
Krayak (Pathfinder Environment) the one sentence in the grammar error box has grammar errors
Ring of Shadows (Pathfinder Equipment) Wording is a bit muddled.

d20M Pages[edit]

d20M Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
Page Name Notes
Kryptonian (D20 Modern Class) Wording needs improving.

Uncategorized Pages[edit]

Pages with no edition category

Uncategorized Articles with a "Wording Issues" template.
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Augmented (5e Class) Numerous run-on sentences, failure to properly capitalize or punctuate, failure to describe effects clearly and concisely in 5e-analogous wording
Devil King Sentences are often non existent.
Tranquil Knight (5e Class) The text does not follow the standard for wording of features. Please look at features from official classes for reference
Turtle Gun (5e Equipment) Does not use 5e terminology
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