Talk:Feather Chain (3.5e Equipment)
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Please proofread. I went through this post and found 7 different spelling and grammatical errors that I promptly fixed. There may still be more because I only skimmed it, but please go through your posts for these little errors :)
Empty links[edit]
I noticed your link to the Erinyes Devil is not connected anywhere, I am just adding the proper link to the open game content for Erinyes posted on this site.--Vrail 03:28, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
- Why thank you. --Grim914 04:32, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
Grammar[edit]
I was just noticing, in your opening quote you start a sentence with and (this is actually sometimes correct grammar, but that is very rare), as well you have a couple of sentence fragments. Is this meant as idiomatic language, or could I help out by changing it? --Vrail 05:57, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
