Talk:Eye Mage (5e Class)

To All Editors

Welcome to my Eye Mage class! Before you start editing anything about this class, please send a message my way (preferred) or post a message on this discussion page about what you want to change. There are some elements about this class that I have designed a certain way, and wouldn't want you to make an edit that I would immediately disagree with. If the edit is purely balance-based, there's a high chance that I will see the problem once you point it out to me, and will be more than happy to work with you to fix the issue.

Thank you in advance. WiserVisor (talk) 20:55, 19 February 2019 (MST)

Wording Review

Hey, I'm reading through the class and I've found a couple of minor issues so I figured I would take some time to fix what I could (mainly terminology and links). For the time being I won't be changing anything in terms of balance but I'll leave some comments here.

• Saving throw proficiencies: It is good practice in 5e to give classes a common saving throw proficiency (dexterity, constitution or wisdom) and an uncommon one (strength, intelligence or charisma). This is specially important when considering the class for multiclassing purposes.
• Some features (specifically The Changing Eye) should probably have a fixed range, specially when they need you to look directly at your target's eyes.
• Eye Capture (the 20th level feature) should either have a limit (for example being able to keep a single spell within your eye) or be restricted to the Eye Mage spell list.
• D&DBeyond is not included among the external sites that can be linked in the wiki (see Help:D&D Links) so all those links in the spell list should be changed to reflect that (and right now I'm feeling too lazy to do it myself ngl).

I'll add more if I see anything else. Draelm (talk) 09:47, 20 September 2021 (MDT)