User talk:Lyrad8791/sandbox2
Comments, questions, and critique's on the current history of Peroan[edit]
Okay, I was thinking about making the first section into an outline of the history. You know, age: 2million years, population 1million humans, so on and so on. In the end, I left it as this until I get further feedback. If people think that it would be easier to read or they would be able to understand it better the other way, let me know. From this point on, give me as much as you can give. Whether it is advice on how to progress my world or ideas on a civilization within the world. Even if its just to tell me that I misspelled something or the my grammar sucks! Although, I would prefer that everyone stay on topic here. Any ideas on what could have happened in the past, that I could add to the worlds history, pass it on over. Thanks for everyone's help. Lyrad8791 21:10, 9 October 2011 (MDT)