Talk:Songbird (5e Race)

Per review request:

• Main race:
  • Looks ok, good amount of room to add with subs. What is Sylvern? You mean Sylvan? Also, be sure to use complete sentences.
  • The -1 to con is strange to me. Mainly because it is discouraged in 5e at this point for race design. It can stay, for all it does. It's just a bit strange and could pose a bit of a hamper on starting player hp, not to mention those poor con saves.
• Solar sub:
  • +1 ASI, Guidance to two ability checks
  • +5 walk speeed
  • Magic through song needs spell links.
• Lunar sub:
  • +1 ASI, Darkvision
  • Magic through song needs spell links. Also, cantrips should be singular

Overall, I'd say balance is fine. Subraces are sorta skewed in favor to Solar Just some capitalization dings (race and subrace names are lowercase unless derived from content that uses otherwise (Pokemon, eg)). Pretty good port--Yanied (talk) 20:51, 2 January 2024 (MST)

Some changes were made, which slightly alter my assessment. But, additionally, these guys don't seem to me like pure fey. They're more like just humanoids that came from fey influences, hence a severely weakened ancestry trait (lol). Anyway, if they are pure fey, they gain immunity to spells like dominate person and whatnot. The newer changes to the subs have also balanced them both in power level.--Yanied (talk) 21:08, 2 January 2024 (MST)