Talk:Sendo Monk (5e Class)

I just wanted to make this discussion page to get some feedback.

Some of the features could use a bit of rewording, to make how they work clearer. There are a few places where the capitalization could use some work to be more in line with the standard formatting of things. Undaunted Spirit seem like it could have some balance issues, though I am not an expert on 5e balance. Sendo Deep Pass seems kind of strange, and I'm not really certain how exactly it would work. Maybe re-do the wording on it? Ki Refraction seems kind of expensive for what it does. Maybe use the gem as a focus, instead of a material component? -- Penumbriel, Sat. May 18th 2019, 9:27 PM

Could you point me to the specific places where capitalization and phrasing confused you? Thank you for your feedback by the way! -- NGamerS, Mon. May 27th 2019, 9:30 PM GMT+3

I will list the ones i saw:

- You need to write the name of the ability. For example, "Strength" instead of "Str". - There's no "Health Points". you should say "hit points" instead, without capitalization. - You don't need to capitalize the name of the class, when referring to it on the text. - You don't write "per long rest". Check some official classes on the PHB, they usually write something along the lines off: "You can use this feature X. Once you expend all your uses, you can't use it again until you finish a long rest" or "Once you use this feature, you can't do it again until you complete a long rest"

Again, you pick some core class and see how they are worded, to help you. Anastacio (talk) 23:01, 9 June 2020 (MDT)