Talk:Oath of "Throwing it Back" (5e Subclass)

Fascinate As an action, you can attempt to Fascinate a Humanoid within 30ft. of you that you can see. Roll a Charisma (Performance) check contested against the target’s Wisdom (Insight) check. If you succeeded, the target enters a fascinated state for 1 minutes or until it takes any damage. In this state, the target is effectively stunned with the power of “Shawty”.

The "effectively" in this segment could suggest that the target isn't stunned, but is still suffering the effect of stunned, overcoming immunity to the condition.

I'd recommend putting the flavor in front to be in line with WotC writing.

Here's how I would write it:

Fascinate with the power of “Shawty”, you throw it back so hard that you can cause people to block out all other stimulus. As an action, you can attempt to Fascinate a Humanoid within 30ft. of you that you can see. Roll a Charisma (Performance) check contested against the target’s Wisdom (Insight) check. If you succeeded, the target is stunned for 1 minutes or until it takes any damage. In this state, the target is effectively stunned .

Additionally, for master of "thiccness" it's says "double your total movement speed". There is no such thing as total movement speed, it should say "double your movement speed"