Talk:Foxfolk (5e Race)
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Hope you enjoy! --HikariSakishima (talk) 15:16, 30 June 2022 (MDT)
Per requested review[edit]
The traits seem pretty solid, not too powerful or weak. Good job. History and society seem mostly fine, since most people write arguably less. I wonder if they sell stolen goods or do they produce their own merchant goods? That would be interesting to include. Also, what sort of passage do they undergo? Their history is the usual "wizard did this" so that will suffice, sort of like a fairy tale. Overall, good brew. There are some punctuations and grammar bits that need fixing (capitalization in particular). --Yanied (talk) 19:14, 20 July 2022 (MDT)