Talk:Dwarf, Age of War (4e Racial Trait Variant)

Balance

Are the racial traits balanced, or do they need tweaking? I think they may be abit too powerful, but I am not sure... --Sam Kay 02:27, 10 April 2009 (MDT)

They seem well balanced. In truth they are almost identical to that standard Dwarf, with the addition of Ancesteral Grudge, and the Fortitude bonus. Although this may be a bit musch, so I would drop the least "flavorful" of the traits: Stand Your Ground. Never liked it much with the standard Dwarf, and just to keep this from seeming OP it might be better just gone. Still leaving it in really wouldn't overpower them. -- Sepsis 06:08, 13 April 2009 (MDT)

Ok, done. --Sam Kay 03:13, 14 April 2009 (MDT)

Ancestral Grudge might need some careful wording, as Giant is also a keyword as well as a specific monster. Marasmusine 06:48, 9 January 2012 (MST)

Description

Is the description good, or does it need tweaking? --Sam Kay 02:28, 10 April 2009 (MDT)

The Physical Qualities section is great. The Playing a Dwarf section needs a bit of cleaning up. The verbage is fine, but the way it is laid out makes it look a bit messy, also I think I caught a "life" where a "live" should be in the Physical Qualities section. Lastly the Dwarf Adventurers section needs some serious cleaning up, at the moment it looks confusing and messy. -- Sepsis 06:08, 13 April 2009 (MDT)

Is that better? --Sam Kay 03:13, 14 April 2009 (MDT)

Yes..both are much better now. -- Sepsis 10:45, 14 April 2009 (MDT)