Talk:Alma

To fix list

Ok, I'm starting a list of things for you to fix. This is only my first glance, I (and others) may add to it. Here it goes:

• lose all the <- and -> that are around class abilities
• delete the spells per day column if you don't need it
• Standardize BAB (+15/10/5) (as suggested by name Violation, I agree)
• Standardize saves, Good will, bad fort/ref looks like what you want
• You've botched the table somehow, look into fixing that. (I can check that out if you don't know wiki formatting well)
• Pick a gender and use that gender when using gender specific pronouns (stop with the "he or she")
• put lines between every class feature
• describe all class features (I'm lookin' at you, Child form)
• order class features by level attained, not alphabetically. Only alphabetize class features gotten at the same level
• Class skills. you need them. Get them.
• general proof-reading. Make sure all of your sentences are complete sentences that make sense.

--Badger 21:05, 5 June 2010 (UTC)

Statement

when does the class go the homebrew list and how do you get rid of the spells per day category —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Dread fear (talk • contribs) . Please sign your posts.

First of all, there's no need to delete all the content of a talk page every time you respond. As to the class homebrew list, you removed the category that makes it show up. I mentioned this in the above section. I'll fix that for you as well as the spells/day. JazzMan 22:38, 5 June 2010 (UTC)

how do u put a paragraph on the tabled homebrew page?Dread Fear 5june 2010

In the author box there is a line that says "|desc = Fighter that can use psionics". you can replace that text (Fighter that can use psionics) with whatever you want it to say. On the Dread fear page. --Badger 23:07, 5 June 2010 (UTC)

the page wont show up dread fear —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 70.247.168.3 (talk • contribs) . Please sign your posts.

It should show up now. JazzMan 00:17, 6 June 2010 (UTC)

Actually, the page you're likely viewing only shows classes that don't have improving or renewing tags. Because you're class has those, it won't show up until they are removed. They won't be removed until the class is brought up to snuff. --Badger 00:23, 6 June 2010 (UTC)

how should i bring it up to snuff dread fear

See that "to fix" list up there? Fix all of those. Once you fix all of that get an admin to check out your class and see if they agree. --Badger 00:35, 6 June 2010 (UTC)

WoTc actually went out of its way to not have a base class with full bab and manifesting. i would suggest cleric bab. also maybe bring the hd up to a d8--Name Violation 00:50, 6 June 2010 (UTC)

i fixed it.dread fear

No, this class is still nowhere near complete. You need to fix everything on that list, not just some of them. --Badger 00:56, 6 June 2010 (UTC)