Talk:Sky Mage (5e Class)

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My name is Alex, or Cevlar226. I am the creator of this class. If you have played this class in a campaign, or just have any thoughts on the class, please drop a comment or 2 below so I can improve my work. If you believe you have a good idea for a spell, or want to change something in the class, please leave a comment here first, detailing what you wish to change. I am working hard on this class and am happy to listen to public ideas.

Hello, I noticed that the class gets new "class powers" on levels where they also gain a new spell slot level. With a few exceptions, getting access to the next level spells is usually considered the class feature for that level.
You might also find Class Do's and Don'ts (5e Guideline) helpful (e.g. "per short rest" needs rewording) Marasmusine (talk) 16:33, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi, Alex here, I have had a look at the CP per levels, and i realize that in most cases, getting a new spell lot would be classed as a feature, however, with class powers already being removed from levels where you get ability score improvements, if i do remove them every 2 levels on top of that it would only leave about 8 CP overall. I could increase the number you get, for when y ou do get them, however i feel like it is more balanced to have them spread out in smaller numbers.

Feedback on tier 1
  • Tier 1 is mandatory at 1st level, and Acrobatics proficiency is mandatory when you pick a tier 1 power, so why not just make Acrobatics a class skill?
  • Try not to mix flavour with the features (which should just say what the mechanics are) or bring in matters of DM adjudication (such as the "hack basic electrical equipment")
  • Saving throws aren't made "verses damage". Maybe you mean "You have advantage on Dexterity saving throws made against effects that would deal lightning damage."; but then it doesn't really make sense for this to "become" resistance, so I don't know what you mean.
  • Use headers (or semi-colon) for CPs rather than bullet points.
  • Wind missile doesn't say how the stones are "enchanted", and doesn't say how you attack with them. It says you can enchant 1d8+1 stones, then says you can only have 2 stones prepared. I don't know what this means.
  • "not adjacent to you" should be "further than 5 feet from you"
  • "'You may use this 1 time per Air Tier you've obtain per long rest. " should be "You can use this feature once per air tier you have reached. You regain theses uses when you finish a long rest". (i.e. don't use "per long rest") Marasmusine (talk) 03:19, 23 June 2017 (MDT)
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