Talk:Savath (5e Race)

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I think the description could do with some work. Firstly, I'm not sure how or why the would be part of an adventuring group. They spread coldness and darkness, and are terrifying and ghostly. When I look at a PC race I try to imagine them meeting the rest of the party for the first time in a city tavern. I don't know why a black rider would be there (since they only seem to hang around crypts etc) or how they could get there without everyone running away screaming for the guards.

Secondly, their origins are left as a mystery, but surely the black rider itself would know something about that? Marasmusine (talk) 03:17, 17 April 2018 (MDT)