Talk:Okka (5e Race)

SadCat:Hello, feel free to drop some suggestions on this subject. I am currently buffering out some of the spelling errors & rereading some of the rules. English is not my strong suit but ill be sure to get rid of any mistakes or grammar errors I find.

Tried to tidy up the background a bit, and I recommend explaining how the magic Resistance to ice and vulnerability to fire plays out for them in their culture. Perhaps even a further explanation on why they’re so interesting as a experiment species beyond just genetics: what about their genetics? Also you mentioned that the race has markings branded into them to help others identify them? Perhaps explain this culturally along with their appearance. Overall this species did stand out to me and I hope to see it further elaborated on. Good job CreeperWatcher23 (talk)