Talk:Naruto Shinobi (3.5e Class)

Wowwowowowowowow!!!!!!!!!OH Yeah

Dude you are a god this is like the first well functioning anime class i have seen with my eyes, sure has a couple problems and could do with some more jutsu or you could modify the jutsus but over all it is one smexy class *clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap* well done welll done indeed -- Stryker-Fyre 22:29, 10 October 2009 (MST)

P.S- I overreacted =(--Stryker-Fyre 21:30, 13 December 2009 (MST)

Haha. Well, it does say "Naruto" in its title. That should have been your first warning. Haha. --Jay Freedman 22:38, 13 December 2009 (MST)

finish it plz?

i find this class a little overpowered if you take the base saves and lower one of them and then knock off some of the abilities on the levels that you get bonus feats and then take off the ac bonus then you would have a class that i think isnt overpowered but thats my own opinion also the con+wis for the chakra is a good idea. i made a shinobi class myself and have been using it and modifying it. the ninja or shinobi class is for adaption to every style of play so it should be able to get any kind of exsotic weapon that it wants with the trade off that it cant use simple or martial weapons and it should start off with kunai and shirikans as proficient weapons also there should be a way that you can become a puppet master if you so choose. if you take my ideas thats good and if not thats ok too if you have questions contact me at fred_frazer@yahoo.com my name is fred if you need a good place for some jutsus then this site would be a good idea: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Category:Jutsu also if you need help with ideas for stuff like ninja tags or any other kind of gear drop me a message and ill see what i can dig up PS. i rate it a 2 overall because its too overpowered because a monk has the same saves and it has absolutely now other abilities other than its ability to hit hard so you basicly made a monk with ninjutsus and that makes it twice as powerful as a monk and therefore overpowered im not saying it to be mean im just saying in order for any DM to allow this class it has to be a little less powerful.

and adding to my earlier comments

its me again and your chidori is off, you would be too exsausted to do another attack after your attack with it so you couldnt attack again until at least next round. the chidori is suppose to be a finishing move. also you should add that if thier chakra runs out they are treated as being at health 0 because they are too exsausted to continue to fight. ok i think im done now... also you can search kyuubi on the website i gave you so you can also make the kyuubi in D&D format. if you get lost give me a message back. i had a mockup of the naruto shinobi that was ok'd by 6 dms for ordinary campaigns. i have a bunch of friends that make classes and races so if you need help just ask me if i have any imput and ill look into it

I want to make my own page

Im starting out and I have an extensive list of Jutsu for a naruto Campaign and I wanted to make a page for it. HOw to how I dont know. Any tutorials?

Needs More

First: there needs to be a more distinct difference in jutsu, by that i mean make more different ways to go with element techniques. the rasengan is simply condenced chakra not a wind jutsu itself, the rasen shuriken is a wind jutsu due to narutos wind nature combined with the rasengan. if theres no limits people will find loop holes to learn more techniques when the shouldn't be able to. and add more blodlines like the rinnegan, it seems like the class was made without paying attention to the series, also more jutsus have been made, this page is obsolete when it comes to jutsus.

Second: JINCHURIKI! there needs to be a way to be a jinchuriki, its been so well defined in the series nowadays it should be simple to make a page. the only reason i don't do it myself is because ive tried and faild so many times.

Rating

Balance - 3/5 I give this class a 3 out of 5 because I'd be better if the PC was able to have a blood line while being able to pick a path like Ninjustu,Taijustu, and Genjutsu. --76.21.191.83 19:12, 18 March 2014 (MDT)

Wording - 3/5 I give this class a 3 out of 5 because Some things could just be written down instead of telling them to refer to the handbook constantly. --76.21.191.83 19:12, 18 March 2014 (MDT)

Formatting - 4/5

Flavor - 4/5 I give this class a X out of 5 because It is unique and different from the other Naruto related classes. --76.21.191.83 19:12, 18 March 2014 (MDT)

Puppeteer Prestige Class Summons a puppet which uses 0.1 chakra per turn and is used as a weapon?

where is this class cuz I cant find it? I want to be a puppet master with chakra and ninjustu's but idk where to look for the class that goes with this one which make it hard to do so don't u think? at least a link to it would help find it easier so we know which one ur talking about.

first post with a user name

sorry if i am doing this wrong. but i noticed a couple things that need fixing.1.the ability gained at 10th level (either improved chakra accumulation or normal chakra cummulation)does not have a description of whaat it does. 2.there are still no genjutsu 3.the amount of jutsu is very low. im in the process of making every jutsu listed on the naruto wiki availble with this character sheet.3. the site has problems linking to this class i typed in the url exactly as it was it made a link to a page that was completely empty.i fear this page and all related pages may have been abanoned by the orginal creator EDIT:I FOUND ANOTHER ERROR. the table for epic shinobi says you gain a third ninath path but the desc4iption says a second ninja path