Talk:Maivanda (4e Deity)

Chihuahua0, It seems your deity has little purpose of its own. In my opinion it is little more that a fanficiton-esque counterfeit of an already existing deity with an added fetish for teddy bears. If I don't see any increase of individuality, or some marker of practical use or implementation in a comedic campaign, I suggest that this entry should be deleted. --98.226.246.244 12:08, 12 August 2009 (MDT)

CORRECTION:

I had suggested that this entry should be deleted. I am now working to assist its completion. However I go about it, I still feel it should be deleted if inadequate progress has been made.

--98.226.246.244,TheCritic 15:00, 13 August 2009 (MDT)

Teddy Bears

If the mentions of "teddy bears" refers to a member of the Ursidae family, it should simply say 'bear' for clarification. If it means the similarly shaped comfort object, that would radically change the meaning and purpose of the deity. Which is it? please advise. That means you Chihuahua0.

TheCritic, formerly 98.226.246.244

--98.226.246.244 14:54, 13 August 2009 (MDT) --TheCritic 13:58, 13 August 2009 (MDT)

CORRECTION:

I see now that the mentioned "Teddy Bears" are the fey species also authored by Chihuahua0. I will edit accordingly. Please be more specific next time.

--98.226.246.244 14:54, 13 August 2009 (MDT) --TheCritic 14:56, 13 August 2009 (MDT)