Talk:Maidra (5e Race)
OK. That's the preload repaired. Just dupe the subrace section a few times, and then fill them out as siderial castes. Giving subraces a cool name is always better than just saying "subrace" in my opinion! I'll be back to give this a real review some time tomorrow. Sorry I'm so slow lately! --Kydo (talk) 17:25, 20 September 2016 (MDT)
Aw man, another pretty humans race. I know you're new, but we see a lot of that around here. It's downright cliche, actually. What are solarians and lunars? The naming section is demanding a LOT of prior knowledge from players and DMs alike. Based on that, I'd be forced to use wikipedia and google simultaneously to find and collect enough appropriate names to have a resource pool for naming NPCs. --Kydo (talk) 18:11, 21 September 2016 (MDT)