Talk:Keyblade Wielder, Variant (5e Class)

Hey I just wanted to chime in and just give a bit of advice.

-Many of your features wording are unclear

-its seems you can chain many AP action in one turn so long as you have the AP(try 'as a bonus action, you can spend X AP to...')

-I feel their may be to many resources for the player to juggle and keep track of (i.e. AP ft.,spell slots and spells)

- you may want to add the keyblade as a piece of starting equipment

-theirs no need for starting armor if they get unarmored defense

- lastly, your archetypes seem like the fighting style feature

--RedGXD (talk) 22:45, 1 January 2018 (MST)