Talk:Half-Ooze (5e Race)

If anyone cares to critique this, here's the place (At least I think you can comment here. If not apologies)

Critique

Hola, I'd say it looks good except Engulf. Is there a way to simplify the mechanics? Other than that, a couple lore subjects could use a handful a sentences to polish this thing off. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 19:31, 18 August 2018 (MDT)

There is a similar race than these that is very well described, the Ooze-kin. Maybe edit the actual text to consider this as a variant? Mazhel (talk)

I am not one to oppose consolidated pages, with variants listed on them if they are similar enough. If this is lacking enough fluff then perhaps it should be "simple" to incorporate it with the Ooze-Kin. ~ BigShotFancyMan (talk) 07:43, 6 March 2019 (MST)

Nope, actually the Ooze-kin have a corrosive subrace that is too close to this one. The only difference I read is that the Half Ooze have normal vision and can engulf, while the Ooze-kin have blindsight, so I am puting it as a subrace of the Ooze-kin. Deletion seems reasonable after that. Mazhel (talk)

Apologies, I had no idea the Ooze-kin page existed. I'll modify it to be a variant. NorMak3 (talk)