Talk:Astral Sorcery (5e Subclass)

Questions

So, Magical Makeup. In a nutshell lasts until the end of your next turn (until you get font of magic) and you get +2 AC and temp. HP, adv. vs. frightened and charmed, and a different way to attack? Improved Magical Makeup-why not make it refresh after short rest, sort typical for features that are meant for one encounter. I'm not sure about gaining back 3 sorcery points, quite the resource to be getting back essentially free. I think the number of charges needs clarity as well, how many does it start with and is that every time its summoned. Master Makeup-Blossom needs to be a bonus action, otherwise there's no limit to how many times it is cast. Overall I like this subclass a lot, find it decently balanced. I skeptical about the extra force damage while transformed, but play test should reveal any major issue in my opinion. For not, I am going to stub it for needing wikify. Hopefully other changes or discussion about the points I made occur. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 11:14, 20 April 2018 (MDT)

OP here. First of all, I'd like to thank you for your honesty in critiquing this--I don't have much experience in making homebrew stuff, so it's very helpful. Second, I've changed the wording on some things and nerfed a couple of the more overpowered effects, so hopefully it's balanced a little better now. Unfortunately I'm not sure how to change the formatting, save by breaking up a few things into more bullet points. Any help that can be provided on that front would be appreciated. (23 April 2018, 10:41 EST)

Glad to have helped. I think there's a few more tweaks needed to hit the sweet spot but good job on the edits. All wikify means is to link things found in the SRD to it. Such as advantage or frightened or Strength. You can find the SRD here to see what you can link. Feel free to ask for help linking the terms. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 07:12, 3 May 2018 (MDT)