Talk:Android, Variant (5e Race)

This race is a Direct Conversion using the 5e guide for previous editions and the Pathfinder Game. BHopper2 (talk) 08:27, 3 January 2018 (MST)

The original points highlighted in the needs balance template still stand. Please avoid removing such templates until such changes have been met. ConcealedLight (talk) 09:30, 3 January 2018 (MST)

I have attempted to make the race more balanced. I feel like they should gain a proficiency, but I am unsure in what. Perhaps Investigation or Insight. Please share your thoughts on the subject. Apocalyptias 14:46, 5 March 2018 (MST)

Read this section of the 5e Race Design Guide#Referencing, check out the Help:When to Italicize and Capitalize and as stated in the maintenance template the Musicus Meter (5e Guideline) has the correct wording for all racial traits in the Players Handbook as you've misworded a few. To answer your question, I believe Investigation would be an appropriate skill, reflecting the logical and computational method of thinking androids would excel at. --ConcealedLight (talk) 16:54, 5 March 2018 (MST)

Wonderful! Thank you for the resources. I have since balanced it a fair bit more and properly referenced everything I could. Let me know if anything is amiss so I that I can correct it in the future! Apocalyptias 17:53, 5 March 2018 (MST)

It's no problem. I've made some edits since you've misinterpreted a few of the sources I've given but that's fine. As it stands it is balanced I'd say but the lore and page image need to be touched up and changed. I've left the image template open for you to add an image of your choice if you'd like as well. --ConcealedLight (talk) 06:25, 6 March 2018 (MST)

What did I get wrong? I'll want to avoid that in the future. EDIT: I just went through the revision history. Thank you for that! Apocalyptias 08:53, 6 March 2018 (MST)