Talk:Advanced Dwarven Mechanical Tank (5e Equipment)
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Hey Fnaffan, I wanna start by saying there's a wall of text. Not fun for anyone so what might be your goal with this item? I also see templates were removed, and then I am asked to fix this. Would it be fair to leave templates if your going to acknowledge there's issues? It'll help anyone else that might want to help with it. Lastly, I can't promise I'll fix this. With that, I await your replying and read up on this novel lol BigShotFancyMan (talk) 08:49, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- I've read through it and want to speak on Blobby's behalf he wasn't complaining. He is what I consider a 5e equipment subject matter expert and means well. He is always reviewing other articles, and we encourage people to improve their own work as well and help out when we can or are asked to as you have done. I know you made some improvements but the templates need re-added until the issues are dealt with. I need to read up on Mounts and Vehicles to properly help you, I deal much more with classes, with races and equipment only being touch when necessary. So sit tight, don't get discouraged by templates or Blobby, they both are to help. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 09:02, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- I intentionally left out the bit about lava because I didn't find this practical, which, the whole idea is hard to swallow but I'm open minded to this idea because floating/flying cities exists. I'd almost recommend writing this up as one of those instead of as a vehicle. Other things need added like how much this carries. Please let me know if there are things you don't like. I tried my best to include EVERYTHING you put and make it readable for everyone. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 10:10, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- Good job on the rewrite big shot, I do like how it looks. I was in the middle of rewriting it as well, but all is well and done.--Blobby383b (talk) 10:20, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- Thank you (for praise) and thank you (for forgiving), had I known you were I wouldn't have touched it BigShotFancyMan (talk) 11:00, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- Good job on the rewrite big shot, I do like how it looks. I was in the middle of rewriting it as well, but all is well and done.--Blobby383b (talk) 10:20, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
- I intentionally left out the bit about lava because I didn't find this practical, which, the whole idea is hard to swallow but I'm open minded to this idea because floating/flying cities exists. I'd almost recommend writing this up as one of those instead of as a vehicle. Other things need added like how much this carries. Please let me know if there are things you don't like. I tried my best to include EVERYTHING you put and make it readable for everyone. BigShotFancyMan (talk) 10:10, 9 May 2018 (MDT)
