The traits are well written, good job. Balance-wise They come out at about 3.5 on this scale so I think you can get away with one additional trait worth 1. Marasmusine (talk) 05:22, 11 April 2019 (MDT)
Musicus Meter[edit]
Musicus Meter Score: 6
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This race has a score of 6 according to the Musicus Meter race guidelines. With this metric, first-party races' scores range from 4.5 to 8. This is a guideline, not a rule, and it's important to use your own judgment alongside this scoring.
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Abomasnow[edit]
Cost |
Racial Trait
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1 |
Strength score increases by 1.
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1 |
Constitution score increases by 1.
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1 |
Wisdom score increases by 1.
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1.5 |
Guardian of Winter
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1 |
Mountain Born
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0.5 |
Powerful Build
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6 |
Total.
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