Talk:Demon's Spearmen (5e Class)
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Revision as of 17:19, 18 May 2020 by 2601:285:303:2fa0:4ca4:131e:b0c3:f9b0 (talk) (→NO fluff: new section)
I am using Grammarly a program one of your own said to use if there grammar problems that mean one of yours gave me a wrong program to use. --Kasai
- This page has a ton of issues. A big thing that I'm noticing is That random words Are Being capitalized In the middle Of Sentences. also, many things that should be capitalized are not. There are many grammar, punctuation, and terminology errors throughout as well. Apparently, the free version of Grammarly only catches the most basic of errors, which for some reason doesn't include any of the problems the page has. It may be helpful to get another human to look the page over. — Geodude
(talk | contribs | email) . . 15:55, 27 August 2018 (MDT)
NO fluff[edit]
The page is also barebones in terms of details and effort put into the abilities. The great majority don't fit the feel of the class and don't scale well with the levels. The choice of curse, for instance, shows VERY small increases in power, and the theme of each curse seems to change. The path of the spear is so underdeveloped that it should be removed entirely. There should be huge improvements made to the class that would make it more solid and playable.