Talk:Death's Incarnate (5e Class)
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There's a lot of vague and poorly worded things in here.
- The first thing to grab my attention was the background. It's biased, sloppily written and makes little sense.
- Another thing is the name itself. IMO the name Death's Incarnation or something similar would be better than Death's Incarnate.
- Next up is the Creating Deaths Incarnate section. Again, strangely worded and biased.
Throughout the entire page there is a variety of grammatical errors and unnecessarily long descriptions. As of writing this, I've only taken a cursory glance at the capabilities of this class. I may return later to provide further (hopefully) helpful criticism. --Amalgamation (talk) 14:34, 30 December 2020 (MST)